Hello people, I know no one actually likes to read the authors notes so I'll keep this short.
This is just an idea I had after I watched the Legion of super heroes series. My sister really enjoyed it and wanted to be apart of it and she really likes Brainiac 5 so I decided to make a story for her. I'm actually still thinking of a plot but here's a prologue, tell me what you think. Really, like, I need help. I love criticism so I can improve...so if you see anything wrong or have any suggestions then please tell me. As long as you're cool about it I'll always take it into consideration. Also I will also take ideas for the direction of the story, if you do give me a few pointers and I use them I'll of course give you the credit.
So without making this longer than necessary, here is what I'm starting out with.
Prologue:
"Long live the legion!" There was a loud cheer as Superman X finished his pledge, making him an honorary member of the Legion of Superheroes. Every one began to mingled and congratulate Kell-el before seeing him of back to the 41st century. Everyone except Brainiac 5, who was currently packing his bags by himself getting ready to leave while all the other members were distracted. He wanted to go say his good-bye and be apart of the party, but after everything he had done, he figured it would be better if he just left and let things cool down. Plus he needed some time to go over his new emotions and sort everything out. Being a hero was still in his intentions, however, when his robotic armor came off he was left with nothing to offer but his mind, and even his mind was too busy trying to figure things out to be of use. So Braniac 5 thought it would be better to take a leave of absents.
As he sulked his way down the hall he unknowingly passed a figure leaning on the wall opposite to him.
"What? No good-bye?" Brainy stopped dead in his tracks, he forgot about her.
"I was going to come back." Refusing to turn around to face the girl behind him, he didn't know what to say to her. Omen had been by his side for years and when he lost his mental battle with Brainiac 1 he almost killed her. There was no way he could face her in his current state of mind and not break down.
"Yeah, but how long will you be gone?" He heard her slowly walking over to him and each step was like a sharp edge stabbing him in the back.
"I don't know, until I can regroup my thoughts." Realizing she was right behind him he slowly turned around to come face to face with The Omen. The girl he had grown to like over the past years. Only instead her standing a few inches above him like she usually did, she was hunched over and bandaged up. Brainy could feel the guilt bubbling up in his chest and he wanted nothing more then to run away. Instead he dropped his head, not making eye contact her.
"Well, hopefully it won't be long." Omen reached her hand out to hold his, he didn't return the gesture. But he didn't reject it either. Brainy just let the new sensation of skin on skin take over. "Despite what you think, I'm going to miss you." Omen gave him a small smile and let go of his hand. She took a step back to get a better look at the new human Brainiac 5.
"I know, I'm still getting used to this new form to." He also took a step back, deciding to ignore Omen's last comment as he didn't really have a reply for it.
"I like it, it's softer and the green eyes really suite you." Brainy gave an awkward chuckle and went to grab his bags from the floor. He turned to go but due the complement he got a few moments ago, brainy was feeling a bit more confident about himself and dropped his bags once more. He walked over to Omen and gently grabbed her hand, he lent in until he was only centimeters from her mouth.
"I'll miss you to." He whispered and before his bravery left him he brushed his lips against her's. It took a minute for Omen to return his kiss which caused his newly made heart to start pounding. After they pulled away Brainy turned to grab his things and resumed walking away too afraid to stay and see the reaction of the girl behind hi.
A smile crept across Omen's face as she watched Brainiac 5 walk away "See, was that so hard?"
