I'm starting to write fanfiction again so I thought why not go back to Warriors? Anyways Submit OCs in the reviews. (Template after chapter)
Ravenkit lay in the nursery at Cherrysky's stomach napping peacefully. Ravenkit's black fur held little traces of kit fluff anymore and with that she was almost an apprentice.
Yawning, Ravenkit looked around the almost empty nursery and layed her eyes on her pinkish orange mother. "Cherrysky can I go see the elders?" her mother nodded.
Ravenkit then skurried out of the nursery and up the side of the gorge to the elder's den. Inside the two elders Wispwind and Goldenstreak where bickering.
"Squirrels are by far the best prey" Wispwind argued.
"No, no mice are-" The Golden she cat cut herself off and looked towards Ravenkit "Hello hunny."
Ravenkit dipped her head and then spoke "Yesterday you promised you'd tell me about my namesake?"
Wispwind twitched his whiskers in amusement and muttered "Did we?" In which Ravenkit nodded furiously.
"Wispwind stop teasing her." Goldenstreak muttered poking the grey tom with her claws. "Now Ravenstar was a hyper young one, the day her and her Darkfire joined the clan I didn't get a wink of sleep those two spent the night talking their heads off." The she cat chuckled.
Darkfire was the deputy and a cat Ravenkit wasn't too fond of, He scared her but nonetheless from what Cherrysky said he was a good deputy.
The elder continued "The only time that she cat was calm was when she mentored your mother." Ravenkit gaped.
"She mentored my mother?" She was amazed why didn't Cherrysky tell her that!? Ravenkit's inner thoughts were interrupted by a yowl from the top of the gorge.
Wispwind muttered something she couldn't hear then spoke louder "That doesn't sound like any Skyclan cat…" Goldenstreak nodded.
"Ravenkit get under the moss over there." Goldenstreak pointed her tail at nest of stale moss and Ravenkit did as she was told.
Soon the sound of yowling, hissing and screaming reached her ears. Out of a slight gap in the moss she saw Wispwind peek his head out and jump back into the den in horror. Goldenstreak looked at him confused.
"Rouges… A lot of them." He whispered to the other elder then continued "They look very dangerous… half the clan looks dead." Goldenstreak gasped loudly.
An unknown voice spoke from below "Thorn did you hear that?" and a moment later a cat walked into the den laughed and quickly slit the throats of the two elders, then called back down. "Just some old cats I took care of them don't worry."
Too scared to move, Ravenkit spent the rest of the night hidden under the moss and when she heard the last of the rogues go to sleep in the other dens she darted and didn't stop until she reached the top of the gorge, then she made the mistake of looking down. Her clanmates, Ones she knew and others she had yet to meet lay dead on the gorge floor. But Ravenkit's breaking point was seeing the bloodstained pinkish orange cat lying dead outside the nursery, she couldnt stop herself she threw up and ran….
Ok I need OCs for the other 4 clans and a few rouges loners and kittypets. The story will mostly take place in Thunderclan. Name:
Age in moons:
Rank:
Appearance:
Personality:
Backstory if any:
Family:
Mate:
Other: Tell me what you think of the first chapter.
Clan:
