Kagome's Father Rewritten
"Kagome, you're finally back," her mom said and then coughed, she was laying in her bed sick. "I'll get us something,"
"No mom! You need your rest, I'll get you your dinner and things," she said. She heard her mom cough again. She rushed down the stairs into the kitchen and made her mom a quick dinner. She brought it back to her mom's room with Cold Medicine and a thermometer.
"Mom, it's a hundred and three, you should go see a doctor," Kagome said, handing her mom the phone. Her mom coughed. "Okay, I'll talk,"
The doctor came to Kagome's house and checked up on her mom. Her mom had pneumonia. They rushed her to the Emergency Room, where they took an X- ray. Her mom had it really bad.
"When will my mom be out?" Kagome asked, "We're just going to monitor her for now, do you have anywhere to stay while you mom is in the hospital?" one of the doctors asked.
"Yeah, I'll call a friend, but I'd like to stay with my mom for now, please," she said.
"Okay, just use the phone at the front when you're ready," they said and left.
"Kagome, it's time I tell you about your father," her mom said. Kagome walked up closer to her.
"Yes, mom?" she said.
"You know you're friend with the ears, Inuyasha?" she said. I nodded, in reply, "Your dad is like him, a dog demon," she said.
"Nani!?" Kagome exclaimed.
"He abandoned us because he was the Lord of the Eastern Lands, he couldn't bring a human family to the castle so he left us," she said. 'The medicine must be making mom delusional,' Kagome thought. "I am dying, Kagome, go find your father and live with him,"
"Mom, you're not dying you'll get better mom," Kagome said, hugging her on the bed.
"You're demon characteristics and powers will be coming in completely before you're sixteen, because of a curse you have to meet him before then to get something to help control the youkia blood,"
"Kagome, visiting hours are over, you need to get home," one of the nurses said.
Kagome walked out of the hospital and was making her way to the well. A car drove by with Hojo in it. It stopped.
"Hey Kagome, what you doing walking all the way over here," he said.
"Hi, Hojo, mom's at the hospital with pneumonia, so I was just making my way home," Kagome replied.
"Dad will drive you home, come in," he said.
Kagome went inside the car.
"So, Hojo, is this that girl you liked?" his dad said. Hojo blushed.
"So, want to go to the movies with me on Saturday?" he asked.
"I'll be very busy then, I can't, maybe another time," Kagome replied and went inside. "Thanks for the ride," she said.
She packed her backpack with some more supplies, and then realized what her mom said. She went to her bedroom and took out a necklace from her jewelry box. It was a half charm pendant that her father had given her years ago. She decided to wear it when she went to Feudal Japan. 'My sixteenth birthday?' Kagome thought, 'I'm sixteen in exactly one week!'
She took her backpack and went the well.
"That's a change," Inuyasha said, "You're back early,"
"Let's go to Kaede's, Sango said," They all made their way to Kaedes.
"What's up, Kagome," Sango whispered, "You look really troubled,"
"My mom's in the hospital, she has pneumonia," Kagome said.
"Pneumonia?" Sango asked.
"Very bad sickness worst than flew," Kagome replied. "And." Kagome paused.
"What, Kagome?" Sango asked.
"She told me about my father," tears were coming down her face.
"What about your father?" Sango asked. Kagome realized that Miroku and Inuyasha were listening.
"Kagome, you're finally back," her mom said and then coughed, she was laying in her bed sick. "I'll get us something,"
"No mom! You need your rest, I'll get you your dinner and things," she said. She heard her mom cough again. She rushed down the stairs into the kitchen and made her mom a quick dinner. She brought it back to her mom's room with Cold Medicine and a thermometer.
"Mom, it's a hundred and three, you should go see a doctor," Kagome said, handing her mom the phone. Her mom coughed. "Okay, I'll talk,"
The doctor came to Kagome's house and checked up on her mom. Her mom had pneumonia. They rushed her to the Emergency Room, where they took an X- ray. Her mom had it really bad.
"When will my mom be out?" Kagome asked, "We're just going to monitor her for now, do you have anywhere to stay while you mom is in the hospital?" one of the doctors asked.
"Yeah, I'll call a friend, but I'd like to stay with my mom for now, please," she said.
"Okay, just use the phone at the front when you're ready," they said and left.
"Kagome, it's time I tell you about your father," her mom said. Kagome walked up closer to her.
"Yes, mom?" she said.
"You know you're friend with the ears, Inuyasha?" she said. I nodded, in reply, "Your dad is like him, a dog demon," she said.
"Nani!?" Kagome exclaimed.
"He abandoned us because he was the Lord of the Eastern Lands, he couldn't bring a human family to the castle so he left us," she said. 'The medicine must be making mom delusional,' Kagome thought. "I am dying, Kagome, go find your father and live with him,"
"Mom, you're not dying you'll get better mom," Kagome said, hugging her on the bed.
"You're demon characteristics and powers will be coming in completely before you're sixteen, because of a curse you have to meet him before then to get something to help control the youkia blood,"
"Kagome, visiting hours are over, you need to get home," one of the nurses said.
Kagome walked out of the hospital and was making her way to the well. A car drove by with Hojo in it. It stopped.
"Hey Kagome, what you doing walking all the way over here," he said.
"Hi, Hojo, mom's at the hospital with pneumonia, so I was just making my way home," Kagome replied.
"Dad will drive you home, come in," he said.
Kagome went inside the car.
"So, Hojo, is this that girl you liked?" his dad said. Hojo blushed.
"So, want to go to the movies with me on Saturday?" he asked.
"I'll be very busy then, I can't, maybe another time," Kagome replied and went inside. "Thanks for the ride," she said.
She packed her backpack with some more supplies, and then realized what her mom said. She went to her bedroom and took out a necklace from her jewelry box. It was a half charm pendant that her father had given her years ago. She decided to wear it when she went to Feudal Japan. 'My sixteenth birthday?' Kagome thought, 'I'm sixteen in exactly one week!'
She took her backpack and went the well.
"That's a change," Inuyasha said, "You're back early,"
"Let's go to Kaede's, Sango said," They all made their way to Kaedes.
"What's up, Kagome," Sango whispered, "You look really troubled,"
"My mom's in the hospital, she has pneumonia," Kagome said.
"Pneumonia?" Sango asked.
"Very bad sickness worst than flew," Kagome replied. "And." Kagome paused.
"What, Kagome?" Sango asked.
"She told me about my father," tears were coming down her face.
"What about your father?" Sango asked. Kagome realized that Miroku and Inuyasha were listening.
