First Servant

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Class: Saber

True Name: Susanõ-o

Gender: Male

Height/Weight: 187cm 74kg

Alignment: Chaotic Neutral

Strength: B

Magical Energy: C

Endurance: C

Luck: E

Agility: B

Noble Phantasm: B++

-Class Abilities:

Magic resistance: B

Cancel spells with a chant below three verses. Evin if targeted by High-thaumaturgy and Greater Rituals, it is difficult for him to be affected.

-Skills:

Bravery: B

Ability to ignore most mental interference such as coercion and confusion. Also has the effect of increasing melee damage against enemies.

Divinity: C (EX)

Originally a God, Susanõ-o was banished and stripped most of its divinity resulting in its current rank of divinity.

-Noble Phantasm:

Kusanagi-no-Tsurugi (Grass Cutting Sword)

Originally called the Ame-no-Murakumo-no-Tsurugi, Sword of the Gathering Clouds of Heaven, it was later renamed into its current name.

After slaying Yamato-no-Orochi, the eight-headed serpent, he found this sword in the eighth tail of the serpent. Susanõ-o later gave the sword to Amaterasu to settle their old grievances.

A sword with unrivaled cutting edge, it can cut through any C-ranked or lower defenses on its own. When this Noble Phantasm is activated, it's passive effect is empowered, allowing it to cut through any defense of B rank or lower.

Rank: B

Type: Anti-personnel Noble Phantasm

Range: 1-2

Maximum Target: 1 person or object

Totsuka-no-Tsurugi (Sword of Length Ten Time its Handle)

The original sword Susanõ-o wielded both as a Storm God and during his banishment, it was with this sword Susanõ-o killed the Yamato-no-Orochi.

A divine serpent/dragon slaying sword it has the characteristics of a dragon slayer, giving Susanõ-o an advantage against Dragonkin.

Activating this Noble Phantasm enables Susanõ-o to utilize the very ability that allowed him to slay Yamato-no-Orochi. The sword gathers the air around it, creating a miniature storm, after which one merely has to slash the air to unleash numerous slashes toward the enemy, making it a nigh impossible to evade Noble Phantasm.

Rank: A+

Type: Anti-Army Noble Phantasm

Range: 2-50

Maximum Target: 400 people

-Details:

Originally the Storm God of Japan, and one of its main deities, he was banished from heaven by Izanagi as a result of its tantrums.

This banishment resulted in a Susanõ-o largely stripped of its divinity and it's godly powers, he went on an adventure. Eventually he came to a river and followed the river upstream until he came upon an elderly couple and their daughter, Kushinada-hime. Seeing those three crying, he asked what ws wrong. Kushinada-hime told Susanõ-o about Yamato-no-Orochi, and that she was to be sacrificed to the monster.

Having fallen in love on first sight, he asked the hand of Kushinada-hime in exchange for slaying the beast. The elderly couple agreed and told him the location of Yamato-no-Orochi. He then travelled to the monster's lair and saw the beast. The beast, Yamato-no-Orochi had not only 8 heads, but also 8 tails and was so large he covered eight valleys and peaks.

Undaunted he entered it's lair and battled the monster using his famed sword Totsuka-no-Tsurugi eventually slaying the beast. Susanõ-o then proceeded to cut the beast in pieces, he started with the first tail. When he reached the fourth tail, his sword hit something hard. Inside this tail he found Kusanagi-no-tsurugi.

After having slain and cutting the serpent in pieces, he then took Kushinada-hime as his wife and went to Izumo to build a palace for the two of them to live in.

It was only much later, after having given the Kusanagi-no-Tsurugi as a present to Amaterasu, he was finally given reprieve and allowed back into Heaven.


My first story AND my first servant.

I know quite a bit about Nasuverse and I know Gods cannot be summoned as Heroic Spirits. However, the Susanõ-o summoned here as a Saber is NOT the Storm God Susanõ-o, but the Hero of legend and slayer of Yamato-No-Orochi Susanõ-o. It's comparable, I suppose, to Amaterasu and Tamamo-no-Mae. Tamamo is in essence Amaterasu, however, being an avatar, she can be summoned as an Heroic Spirit.

Regarding the parameters of Susanõ-o, I'm a bit uncertain if they are a correct reflection of his skills. Is he overpowered, or to weak?

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