A/N: This is my first fan fic. I'm not a very creative writer either. So please read and review and tell me what you think!
Disclaimer: Sadly, I don't own anything.
Italics: thoughts
Chapter 1: Breathtaking
It was a clear night on the train to Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. Harry Potter, Ron Weasley, and Hermione Granger, all in their sixth year, had a compartment to themselves. Harry was waiting for his girlfriend, Ginny Weasley, Ron's younger sister. He watched longingly at the door. While doing so, Ron and Hermione were kissing each other ever so pleasantly.
Just then the door slid open. Ginny had finally arrived. Harry went up and gave her an I-Missed-You-A-Lot kiss. They then sat down and enjoyed the rest of their ride to Hogwarts with a game of Exploding Snap.
The train began to slow down and then came to a halt. Harry, Ginny, Ron, and Hermione got a horseless carriage to themselves. It was just then that Ginny broke up with Harry.
"Harry, I must say, you were by far, the best boyfriend I have ever had! But me and Ron and the rest of the family went to Romania to visit Charlie this summer, and there was this guy there and he . . ." Ginny couldn't finish. She knew to stop by the look on Harry's face.
He knew what was coming. He could just feel it. Feeling heartbroken, he couldn't look at Ginny anymore. Much less talk to her.
"I'm so sorry, Harry"
The rest of the ride up to the castle was a silent one, though Ron and Hermione tried to strike up conversations, but the conversations wouldn't last very long.
Once everyone got up to the castle, Ginny said "sorry" once more to Harry and left to go see her fifth year friends.
Harry kept feeling like he had been played. He did indeed love Ginny Weasley, very much. He loved her more than any of the other girls he had dated. He sat there and thought "How could she do THIS to me! Why? Why? WHY?"
Harry knew he would have to stop thinking about her sometime, but when he looked at her down the Gryffindor table, she just looked so beautiful. Ron was looking at Harry knowing what he was thinking.
"Your gonna have to get over her sometime you know?" Ron said trying to comfort his friend.
"I know, but . . ." Harry's mind wasn't thinking of anything but Ginny, "it is so hard! I never knew love could hurt this much!"
"Look Harry, I know love hurts, we all have been through it. But you have to move on! Today!" Ron looked over at Hermione, who gave him a smile, then back at Harry.
Harry gave Ron a look that made Ron laugh. Harry had to give him credit for his consistency. He decided he did need to move on, but this was going to take more than a couple of hours to over.
And yet, there was always another girl Harry was very taken with and they were both attracted to each other. This peculiar girl's name was Cho Chang. Harry really liked her, but he never had the guts to ask her out. Whenever he had talked to Cho or at least tried, he would mumble and blush so much that his face was as red as Ron's hair. He knew he could at least gather the strength to talk to her, or maybe even ask her out. He made plans to go through with it tomorrow. NO MATTER WHAT!
By the time Harry was done daydreaming, a girl that looked like she should be in the fifth or sixth year, was being sorted. Her name was Krystal Torres.
"GRYFFINDOR!" the sorting hat shouted.
She went and sat across from where Ginny was sitting. Harry couldn't help thinking that she was pretty. But he then saw Ginny and felt distraught once more. Then he looked back at Krystal, and all his thoughts vanished away. She was, Harry thought, breathtaking.
A/N: I know I'm not the world's greatest writer, but I tried my best! So please R&R! And try to be nice, and not flame me! Remember, I'm new! I will greatly appreciate it! Any questions or anything, just ask. PLZ REVIEW!
