Eve/Michael freeverse for Hanziii
Inspired by misswhiteblack's amazing ones


It hurts so bad
to be close to her but not to kill her
her blood, it's intoxicating to him
but he can't hurt her…

If he hurt her, he couldn't live with himself
to see her body cold and hard
it would be a torment
an eternal punishment

She kisses him and he is drawn in
but she invokes such a monster in him
it's getting harder to hold on
but he can't give in.

But her blood, it draws him in
he smells it in her neck
the sweet, seductive crimson life
but he can't take it from her

To take it from her would be to betray himself
he would go back on what he said
he wouldn't be able to stop
he'd kill her

He can't loose her
she's all he has
to kill her would be to lose himself
and betray his Grandad

Sam
he managed for so many years
never killing a human
or even drinking from them

But this is different
the blood lures him in
entices him, makes him want it
he aches so bad for it

But NO!
he can't take it from her
it would be wrong, no matter what she says
yet…perhaps a taste?

She shows him her neck & leaves him torn
he's thirsty, oh so thirsty
could he do it?
he wants to so bad

So he sinks his fangs in & lets the crimson liquid
fill his mouth and throat
it's so delicious, so perfect
it's his girl

It's so exotic & pure
all his
but he can't take much more
or she'll die

The torment of stopping is more than he can bear
he very nearly kills her
but she pulls his head from her neck
and tells him that's enough

Mouth covered in her blood
he sees that she is still alive
he didn't kill her
rejoice!

You can't tell them, she says as she covers her throat
they'd misinterpret it
he knows she's right
but how does he stop the lust for her blood?

He is so thirsty for her blood
he wants it so, so bad
it's the worst torment ever
but he's had his fix

She goes to sleep so he slips away
down to the fridge for blood
he drains three bottles, then four
but the thirst can't be quenched…

Betrayal
he betrayed Sam
he promised he'd never drink from a human
but he broke a promise to a dead man

Yet he ignores this inner qualm as he returns to his girl
the wound still leaking blood
with his tongue, he licks up the remnants
and finally feels sated.

He can't tell anyone what he did
he doesn't want to
but his last thoughts before sleep are
I'm sorry, Grandad, sorry for betraying you.


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Vicky xx