thanks for the reviews of post-johnny: Hopeless Romantic and Goddess of Silent Tears and Scarlett 7 and Robot in Disguise. Always great to know that somebody doesn't think i suck. ^.^
i'm hoping to write some more post-dallas poems after these two, but i want them to be better...grr..writers frustration...
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pov:pony, directed to dallas
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there's this little place on the corner
of picket and sutton
we met before it got too dark, too late
(too late to turn back)
we went under the fence
another broken law
(another broken life)
there were the girls beside us and
the girls on the screen, flashing in front of our eyes
(did your life flash in front of your eyes?)
did you think about this things
or did you just die?
i'm hoping to write some more post-dallas poems after these two, but i want them to be better...grr..writers frustration...
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pov:pony, directed to dallas
--------
there's this little place on the corner
of picket and sutton
we met before it got too dark, too late
(too late to turn back)
we went under the fence
another broken law
(another broken life)
there were the girls beside us and
the girls on the screen, flashing in front of our eyes
(did your life flash in front of your eyes?)
did you think about this things
or did you just die?
