Author's Note: Please read before proceeding 3
Hello everyone! So I took this story down about five years ago in 2010 because I decided that I didn't like it anymore, and I couldn't go anywhere with it. And then about two years ago in February 2013 I brought this story back. Following that, I abandoned it for a long while to work on other stories. But now it's back for good hopefully!
I have updated this story from last year because I've found mistakes in it, so I apologize if it is not like you remembered. Also, keep in mind that I first wrote this fic around 2010, so some of the dialogue and pop cultural references may be a bit dated. I'll try to fix that.
Let me know in the reviews if you are a previous reader of this story, and if you like the changes made. Also if you are a new reader please let me know if you like it, and what you would like to see in the future.
BTW, though I deleted the original Tic-Toc Game from five years ago, the previous updated version from two years ago is still on the website. I will be updating this version of the Tic-Toc Game as a new story. I hope you like this one as I have tried to clean it up a bit. The humor is still the same as is the main plot.
HOWEVER, I have taken into account from earlier reviews and private messages that there are too many girl protagonists in this story. Granted, the main protagonist was Kylie, or 'Cat' as the newsies call her. But having six other girl mains is just too much to keep track of both for me and for the readers, and I could not do each of their characters justice. Therefore, I have gotten rid of the characters of Sophie (who loved Skittery) and Zoe (who loved David). I'm sorry if you felt attached to them, but these two were the least developed characters and didn't really have any subplots of their own and were, for lack of better words, filler characters. Also I have changed the names of most of the characters, so I'm sorry if that's confusing!
Originally, I was going to make this one of those Mary-Sue parodies, but then I changed my mind halfway through. So if it seems a bit mocking at first, I apologize. I will be changing a lot of things in this fic from the original, so heads up.
Lastly, if you have any objections to things that I've added or taken away from the original, leave a review! I'd appreciate the criticism and will try to fix it. Thanks so much for being so patient :D
Please enjoy this updated version of The Tic-Toc Game.
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