So it had been six months since Peter, Susan, Edmund and Lucy went to Narnia and they hoped to go again. England was very, very different to Narnia so they had to get used to the way it is there again and it wasn't too difficult. But there has been a drastic change in their lives since they had a new sister. Their mom had re-married since when their father came back from war him and their mother had many arguments and just didn't love each other anymore so they got divorced.

It was hard for the children and it was kind of unfair since Lucy is only 12, Edmund is 14, Susan is 16 and Peter is 17. So it was hard to go through that being that young but now it isn't too bad. Their mother and father seem to get on better since they got divorced and they both got re-married to really nice people and the children still get to see their father a lot.

When their mother re-married he married a man named Harry and he was really nice and all of the children liked him instantly, but he had a daughter of his own named Maddie. Once the children got to know her they liked her a lot she was funny, smart, beautiful, sporty and she wasn't the typical girl that you would get back then she was very outgoing and adventurous and didn't mind getting dirty.

Some girls thought that she was very strange, since she didn't wear dresses and heels and she didn't wear make-up or jewelry, she was mostly classed as one of the boys since the boys had become more 'now' so they wore jeans and t-shirts mostly but most girls still wore dresses and long gowns but there were only her and a few other girls that wore jeans and t-shirts too.

Maddie had blue eyes and brown hair with a pink tint to it. Her hair was very beautiful and different but definitely not the bad different. She was the same age as Edmund, 14. But she was very positive and strong because the reason her father had got divorced is because Maddies mother abused her behind his back, but Maddie doesn't like to talk about it. Normally you would think that a person that had gone through that would be timid and shy and depressed, but not Maddie she said 'its all in the past and there is no point to dwell on the past and anyway it has made me stronger'.

Anyway all of the Pevensie children were sitting in the lounge room Peter and Susan were reading a book, Maddie and Edmund were playing chess and Lucy was staring out of the window bored out of her mind. It was very quiet until Maddie beat Edmund at chess and she said "ha! Beat you sucker!" "yeah, I just let you win" Edmund said, not happy that she had beat him "yeah, that's what you said the last four times I won Ed" she said then ruffled his hair. This caused Peter and Susan to chuckle.

"guys can we go for a walk?" Lucy asked "yeah, sure lets go" Peter replied "cool, I am getting tired of beating Ed at chess anyway" Maddie said and everyone except Edmund laughed a bit and Edmund just stuck his tongue out.

They all told their parents that they were going out and then left and they decided to go to this field that no one ever went to. They were almost there when Maddie nudged Edmund causing him to look up at her "race ya" she said then her and Edmund went off running to see who would get there first.

While Peter and Susan just looked at them and smiled they loved that Maddie was different it made her more fun also they liked how independent she was like she never cried in front of anyone because she thought that is showed that they were weak or that they wanted attention. Also she never wanted anyone to fuss over her if she was ill or got hurt like one time she was cutting some food and someone slammed the door and made her jump so she cut herself but she didn't cry or moan she just got a bandage put it on then carried on with what she was doing when everyone was asking if she was okay she just said that she was fine and they didn't have to worry.

The race ended up with Maddie winning and Edmund losing. But then everyone else came and they all sat down and started to read since they all bought a book except Maddie she sat away from them and sat where all the daises were and started to make a daisy chain.

After they read for about half an hour they decided they wanted to play a game "do you guys want to play a game?" Peter asked "yeah" they all replied "Lucy can you go and get Maddie please" Susan asked "yeah sure" Lucy said then got up and went over to where Maddie was sitting and tapped her on the shoulder "hey Maddie we are going to play a game would you like to join?" Lucy asked "yes" Maddie answered and stood up with the daisy chain still in her hand Lucy pointed to it and said "what's that?" "it's a daisy chain here" Maddie said then tucked it into the belt of her dress and it looked really cute "thanks" Lucy said then hugged Maddie and they walked over to the others.

Once they got over to the others Edmund asked "so what are we gonna play?" then suddenly lots of wind came and grass started to come up from the ground and surround them still blowing in the wind then there was a flash of white light and the grass disappeared.

So the first chapter! What did you think? I will try to get some more chapters up soon I promise.

Ages:

Peter: 17

Susan: 16

Edmund: 14 ½

Maddie: 14 ½

Lucy: 12 ½

I know those may not be the exact right ages but, oh well! Thank you for reading

Hannah x