I would love for some constructive criticism, don't even mind regular criticism.
There might be some spelling mistakes, English is my second language.
Red Road
Chapter 1: The Accident
Patrick Jane was driving in his old car, there where always something wrong with it. So he had to ask Rigsby or Cho for a ride home, but this was one of the days, where he actually could ride it. He tapped on the wheel, a smile came up on his face, he liked his car, it was wonderful to drive in, he thought.
Suddenly the road went black as the night, "Not now" Patrick said. He drove into the side, and stopped. Patrick stepped out of the car, opened the hood so he could see the engine. He mumbled something to him self. If there where something he just couldn't figure out was a car, he knew how to put gas in and drive a car , that was about it.
He could see a car, maybe just the lights of the car. He started waved his arms, maybe the man in the car could see him and would pull up to help. Patrick could see the car was getting closer, he thought it was going to stop. But it just kept on going and was steering right towards him, now it was so close that Patrick didn't had a chance to get away. He could see the end of his life, everything in his life started to pass by: Red John, the smiley on his wall, his wife and child laying dead on the floor and meeting Lisbon, Rigsby, Van Pelt and Cho.
He could feel bumps, followed by excruciating pain. He could see that the car didn't stop, it hit the safety barriers, he could hear the crash before he passed out.
Patrick came in and out of the unconsciousness, he heard people around him.
Two men was standing above him, flashing lights in his eyes.
Patrick knew that they were paramedics, he wanted to say that they had to call Lisbon, but nothing came out of his mouth.
One of the paramedics said that they where bringing him to the hospital.
