kay, so this is like when itachi's dying and thinking over his life. the emotion builds towards the end... i don't know how to express that desperation and regret simply through words. so. emotion builds towards the end. keep that in mind


Good Intentions

I didn't want to kill them!

Why would I want to kill my family; the family that I love?

I had a good life. I was an honorable ninja protecting my village. And my clan!

I was going to marry Inuzuka Hana, you know. I love dogs—I bet you didn't know that. Dogs are loyal and they protect those they love. They don't kill them! … The last time I saw her…. "Foolish," I had sneered and I brushed past her. I could hear her cry.

I didn't kill Shisui! I swear I didn't! He was my best friend and I told him everything. About those bastards. And he killed himself! He killed himself and I got this Mangekyo. He killed himself… I killed him…!

Those bastards made me do it! I didn't want to kill them! I did it… I did it so that they could die honorably! Like an Uchiha should.

I couldn't kill my little brother! I loved him! He looked up to me and I ruined his life!

What I regret most is not spending time with him.

I didn't want to do it! Why did they make me do it?!

And now Sasuke stands here before me, hating me like I told him to.

I want to tell him… I'm sorry! I love you!

But how could I now? Who would believe me?!

I didn't want to do it! I didn't want to kill them!

I look up at him as I lie here dying.

I'm sorry! God, I'm so sorry!

--The road to Hell is paved with good intentions--


i don't really like the end of this one, constructive criticism is ALWAYS welcome! thanks for reading it!

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