---- I love the show Criminal Minds, and hope this folds out kind of like an actual episode…Enjoy… ----
Germantown, Wisconsin. Jessica Bail is a famous author. She is holding a publishing party for her new best-selling book. There is champagne and lots of distinguished people, plus loud music and laughter.
"I'm just going to step outside for a smoke," says Jessica to her guests. "Of course! And congratulations once more on your success." replies the man she was formerly talking to. Jessica walks to her sliding glass doors and steps out onto her porch that leads off into a huge backyard to match her huge house.
Jessica takes out a cigarette and lights it. She puts it in her mouth and takes a drag. Suddenly she hears someone behind her, she turns around. Jessica hasn't seen the person in ages, but she smiles. "Millie, are you having a nice time? It's so good you could come."
Millie doesn't reply. Instead, she just hits Jessica Bail, renowned author, over the head with a rock.
(Theme song)
May your home always be to small to hold all your friends - Irish proverb
Quantico, Virginia
"Her name is Jessica Bail, she's written four books. On Friday night she was throwing a party - her friends say she went out on her porch for a cigarette. Jessica never returned." JJ explains. "This is the second woman to go missing in less than a week. On Monday, Patricia Cornwall was hosting the opening of an art gallery. She went to go to the bathroom and didn't come back." JJ stands in front of the team, briefing them on a new possible case.
"Well there's your victimology. Women involved in the arts." Morgan points out. "It could easily be a sexist male." Emilysuggests. "Have any bodies been found yet?" Hotch asks. JJ shakes her head, "No, and the city is in quite an uproar." "Both these women lived in the same place?" Reid inquires. "Yes, just blocks away." JJ replies.
"Let's get the jet," Decides Rossi.
Germantown Police Department
"I'm really appreciative that you've come down here so quickly. Mrs. Cornwall and Ms. Bail are very talented and loved women - everyone just wants them to come back." Victor Deluchi, the chief of polices, thanks them all.
"Well this is our job." Hotch replies, "Did these women know each other?"
"I guess they would have met…you'd have to talk to their families." Mr. Deluchi answers. "Morgan, Prentiss, go to the Bail household. Reid, look at what the team here has already come up with. Rossi, we'll go talk to the witnesses - JJ, do you think you could keep the press off this?" Hotch instructs.
"It's going to be hard - these women were celebrities!" JJ responds, "A painter and a writer…" Reid murmurs to himself.
----- I know it's short and badly written….I hope it'll get better…I won't update this until I get a review, because I want to see if anyone would like to hear more… ------
