Hey everybody. This is my first Time using FanFic though I have read many stories. This is about Kim and Jacks trip to Disney world. I love constructive criticism but please no hate. I know my grammar and spelling are bad but try and enjoy :)
Disclaimer: I DON'T OWN KICKIN IT or any of the characters. I only own the plot.
Kim's POV:
Have you ever seen those classic Disney world/land commercials where the little girl is sitting next to a princess laughing and spinning on the teacups and basically having the best afternoon ever? Let me be the first one to tell you that is nothing like life!
I had a fairly normal childhood and on my seventh birthday my parents took me to Disney land. I was so excited I loved princesses and had grown up watching those cheesy Disney movies and commercials. It was going to be magical. I had even planned which princess I wanted to spin me on the teacups (Cinderella). AN I know I picked the most well know princess but if you have any other princesses you'd like me to change it to just comment. It was a four-hour drive to get to Disneyland from Seaford CA and I spent the ride watching Cinderella over and over again. When we finally arrived and were checked in at our hotel I made my dad spend two hours walking around magical kingdom looking for Cinderella. Eventually my father said he needed to use the bathroom and told me to wait outside for him. The minute he left I saw the princess of my dreams, Cinderella!
I screamed and ran over to her. She hugged me as I told her how I wanted to be just like her when I grow up. I wanted to overcome adversity, have an amazing life and marry a prince. Cinderella just smiled and laughed saying how she wished me luck that plan. I then started begging the princess to go on the teacups with me. At first she refused but after a lot more pleading she finally agreed saying "if I do this will you please leave me alone". Of course princess I replied.
We made it trough the line in no time and I thought my fairytale trip to Disney was actually coming true. As the ride ended I was ecstatic! I thanked the princess for her time and was about to head back to my dad when Cinderella threw up all over me! I was horrified. She turned to look at me and said "I hope your happy Kim, you made me a princess puke." I burst out into tears and started running back to my dad.
Ever since that day I've hated Disney characters especially Cinderella and promised myself NEVER to want to be a princess. I wanted to learn how to defend and protect myself instead of some prince so I joined Karate. I'm even a black belt! I train at the Bobby Wasabi dojo and have made lots of nice friends there, especially my best friend... and yes I admit it MAJOR crush Jack Brewer. The only problem is last weekend as a special surprise for all our hard work my Sensei Rudy wants to take us all to Disneyland! I don't want to let them all down but I don't think I can bring myself to go back there.
What will Kim decide to do?
Hope y'all enjoyed the first chapter. More will be up shortly and thanks for reading. I will be posting some of the story including some of the next chapter from Jack's POV so no need to worry. Please Comment and tell me what you think. Remember this is my first FanFic.
