This is my first fan fic so please review

This is my first fan fic so please review!!I do not own any of the Maximum ride characters James Patterson does.

Max pov:

I glanced over towards the gift store, at the end of this long chunk of rooms in the White House, and let out a deep breath. Mr. Oh So Smooth ( Fang) and Ms. Red Haired Wonder ( that red haired wonder) were together again! I mean, HOW can he stand her just looming over him all day long?! Maybe he likes it Max, maybe he feels like nobody really pays that much attention to him and now he might feel more special. Special! So he needs someone who's that pretty standing around him all day long, laughing a little too hard at even the smallest joke, curling her hair around her finger and giving him that flirty smile to feel special! Max, calm down why don't you go over there and try to make a conversation with her. See what she's like. Yeah, sure, okay! I'll just walk over and make a random conversation for no particular reason and just see what happens.

I really wasn't going to go over there but it seemed like I'd have to anyway. I couldn't find Angel anywhere in my sight. Here goes nothing.

I casually walked over to there spot to where the RHW and Fang were AN:( get it I abbreviated her name so that she had less of a spot on the page and- oh nevermind) and gave the RHW a huge, warm, little too happy grin. " Hi Fang! Oh, and you are Jessika! Fang has told me so much about you. How was your time in Russia?" Point 1 to Max.

" I'm Lissa. Fang? Who's Jessika?" There was just a touch of something, maybe anger, in her voice.

" Ummm... hi Max. What did you want to talk to me about that just so happened to give you the urge to come over here?" I gave him a slight smile and a quick glare. He seemed to get the idea that something was going on. 1/2 point to Fang. So far: 1 to me, 1/2 to Fang, and 0 for the lovely Ms. RHW (look who is in the lead). " I can't find Ariel anywhere, did you see her?" I tried to focus on fang and give the RHW very little attention.

" I'll go see if I can find her you two stay there", Fang quickly darted away which left me and HER...

" So Max... Fang hasn't told me that much about you. Just a little, but maybe he thinks little of you." Oh, how she could easily get on peoples nerves!! She really didn't start on the right foot with me... it's never like she ever would have anyway.

" Yeah, he hasn't told me that much about you either. Guess he thinks the same about both of us." She gave me a light smile but I could see the burning anger in her eyes. If only she new how much I loved Fang and was crushed when I saw them together. Wait. Did I just think that? Urgh! Bad Max!!

" Look, Max, it seems as though we've started off wrong. Can we just start over?" She gave me a warm grin I could barely stand. What was she thinking? Is that how normal people act when they get into bad situations? They just ask, " Sorry, can we start all over?"!! I mean, that's like if Ari came up to me after a nasty fight and said, " Max, it seems as though we've gotten into a slight argument, but now I think that we should hug and make up."

" Sure."

Fang came back and reported that he couldn't find Angel. Great! Now on top of everything else I have a missing mind reader/controller!

" Don't worry I'll try and find her." I replied getting ready to leave the small, uncomfortably cozy group, when a crowd of people parted into a circle. Revealing the president of the USA and a little girl with blonde bouncing curls...Angel.

After we all got home ( Anne's house) and I had a talk with Angel about NOT CONTROLLING THE PRESIDENT OF OUR COUNTRY's MIND!! I felt a little tired from the long day, so I drowsily made my way up the stairs. When I was about half way to (my room), I bumped into a stiff figure. Fang... and he didn't seem to happy to see me.

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