Hi. I probably won't say much in the way of introductions like this, but I
just want to welcome you to my fic. This will be my first submission since
joining the site, so I do hope you enjoy it. The rating is currently PG-
13, but it will go up to R. This is because the scenes in later chapters
will become more violent.
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Prologue
"So, is this the only tear?"
"Yes sir."
"Good. We have orders to guard it and make sure nothing escapes to the human world." The large ogre was obviously the one in charge. He and three others were guarding a dimensional tear between the human world and Makai. The tear itself wasn't very big: maybe only large enough for a humanoid demon to pass through. Several tears had occurred in the past but they weren't as big as this one.
"As big as this tear is, shouldn't there be more here to guard it?"
"I can see you have great faith in everyone here."
"Well, I'm just saying. . .what if a demon gang attacks us?"
"Then we'll call for backup and hold them off as long as possible. Now be quiet."
"Hey. Stay sharp, we got an apparition headed this way."
A cloaked figure was walking in their direction. His walk was calm and well balanced. The guards kept their eyes on him and lifted their weapons in preparation, but he kept advancing. The larger ogre stepped in his path, and the cloaked figure stopped. The large ogre spoke with an almost thundering voice, "you are not permitted in this area. Turn the other direction and no harm will come to anyone."
"Four?" He lifted his hooded, and the ogre could see only two crimson eyes glaring from underneath. "Koenma thinks highly of his ogres doesn't he? Or maybe he thinks little of demons?"
"I'm not going to say it again: turn away or get hurt."
The cloaked figure only laughed as his hand emitted a red and black aura. The ogres took a step back, but had no time to react as the hand was thrust in their chest. The guards fell dead to the ground and the cloaked figure passed through the dimensional tear to the human world.
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Intriguing, isn't it? I want to hear your thoughts. Review, but be warned: Flamers will be visited upon with vengeance. Have a nice day. . .or else!!!
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Prologue
"So, is this the only tear?"
"Yes sir."
"Good. We have orders to guard it and make sure nothing escapes to the human world." The large ogre was obviously the one in charge. He and three others were guarding a dimensional tear between the human world and Makai. The tear itself wasn't very big: maybe only large enough for a humanoid demon to pass through. Several tears had occurred in the past but they weren't as big as this one.
"As big as this tear is, shouldn't there be more here to guard it?"
"I can see you have great faith in everyone here."
"Well, I'm just saying. . .what if a demon gang attacks us?"
"Then we'll call for backup and hold them off as long as possible. Now be quiet."
"Hey. Stay sharp, we got an apparition headed this way."
A cloaked figure was walking in their direction. His walk was calm and well balanced. The guards kept their eyes on him and lifted their weapons in preparation, but he kept advancing. The larger ogre stepped in his path, and the cloaked figure stopped. The large ogre spoke with an almost thundering voice, "you are not permitted in this area. Turn the other direction and no harm will come to anyone."
"Four?" He lifted his hooded, and the ogre could see only two crimson eyes glaring from underneath. "Koenma thinks highly of his ogres doesn't he? Or maybe he thinks little of demons?"
"I'm not going to say it again: turn away or get hurt."
The cloaked figure only laughed as his hand emitted a red and black aura. The ogres took a step back, but had no time to react as the hand was thrust in their chest. The guards fell dead to the ground and the cloaked figure passed through the dimensional tear to the human world.
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Intriguing, isn't it? I want to hear your thoughts. Review, but be warned: Flamers will be visited upon with vengeance. Have a nice day. . .or else!!!
