Ok so here's the first page tell me how you like it ok.

"Vakama are you ok?" Turaga Lhikan asked as he came up from behind, Vakama shrugged and said nothing Turaga Lhikan sighed and sat down beside him, "Vakama you can not hide or separate yourself from your brothers and sister, you must lead th~" He was cut off as Vakama huffed, "It's not that Turaga Lhikan it's just..." He cut himself off as he pulled his legs up to his chest and buried his face into his knees, "Vakama... You can trust me with whatever it is bothering you brother."

Vakama shook his head and tightened his arms around his legs and said nothing, Turaga Lhikan was becoming worried for his brother as he saw Vakama's shoulders shake, Turaga Lhikan looked to the stars above and closed his eyes, 'Mata Nui please help me help my brother through his confusing time.'

Turaga Lhikan looked back at Vakama who was shaking even harder, Turaga Lhikan gently put a hand around Vakama and gently rocked him, "Vakama please tell me what has happened that has made you so upset?" Turaga Lhikan asked softly as he gently pried Vakama's arms away from his legs and turned his head toward him and saw small tears streaming from ember red eyes, 'Great spirits, I should not of put this all on his shoulders it has finally came crashing down on him all at once.' Turaga Lhikan sighed again, "Vakama come let's get you home."

Turaga Lhikan got up and helped Vakama up and toward his home/forge and up the stairs to his room and onto his bed, "Sleep, it will help your mind and body to calm." Turaga Lhikan said as he covered Vakama up and gently stroked a piece of hair out of his face and turned away to leave only to be stopped when a shaking hand latches onto Turaga Lhikan's arm, he turns to see Vakama looking at him with tear filled eyes pleading for him not to go,

"Alright I will stay until you fall asleep ok? Turaga Lhikan said with a smile and sat down in a chair beside Vakama's bed and gently stroked his hair and hummed, "Thank you... Lhikan." Vakama said softly as he drifted off to sleep, Turaga Lhikan smiled as he stood up and gently so not to wake him bent over and softly kissed Vakama's forehead, "Sleep well my little Vakama, I will see you in the morning." Turaga Lhikan said as he walked out of Vakama's room and out toward the great temple.

Kind of short I know I'll try to make them longer ok.

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