I've started to go back now and Edit this story to make it better. Reading back on this I really see how I use to write a year or two back and its kinda alittle fun to read back on old stories I wrote.
I don't own Yu Yu Hakusho
I only own Melody, May, April, Mika, Rika and Melody's Mother
Name: Melody
Age: 16
What you are: Mermaid
Looks: long black hair sea blue eye's and dark blue fin
about you: your a girl who doesn't like to listen a free sprit you and your friend may who is also a mermaid like to swaim around the sea and you also sometime forgets things but your a fun girl to hang out with and you have a great voice and is good at dancing too
Name: May
Age: 16
What she is: Mermaid
Looks: light blue hair light green eye's and light blue fin
about her: she like you care free girl sweet and funny she'll do anything for you and help you when others pick on you and you help her when other pick on her and she great at dancing and good at singing.
You are swimming around with May having fun picking up thing that look cool and putting them in your bags.
"hey Melody look at this!" May says
You turn and swim over to her to see her holding a dagger you grab it and look it over. "what you think it is" May asked as you look more.
"I-I don't know" you say.
You touch the blade and end up cutting yourself "ow" you say as you stare at your now bleeding finger. "Melody are you okay" May asked as you nod and put your bleeding finger in your mouth then put the dagger in your bag.
You both started swimming around again then you two swim to your hide-out and put the thing you found on some rocks in there. you smile looking at all the stuff you two have as May lay down on a rock looking over something. you swim up to a little thing with two people on it by the look of it dancing, you smile and out of no where start singing.
(A/N: ok you going to be singing the one the little mermaid song if any of you seen it you should know what I mean.)
May smile watching and listening to you sing, when you were done you sigh laying on the sandy ground with a smile on your face. "wow Melody you sing so good" May says as you smile at her.
"thanks" you say
you two swim out of the hide-out, you noticed it's getting late so you both start to swim home.
You wave to May as you swim away from her, she wave back before going into her house you smile as you swim in to yours. while you pass by a door you hear your name so you stop and swim back to the door and look in to see your mother.
"ah Melody my dear please come here"
you smile as you swim up to her as she sitting on her throne.
that right you are the princess of the seas.
"yes mother" you say.
"well my dear you are sixteen now and I think it's time you find yourself a man" she says as you look down.
"but mother I have not found one and I don't think I will" you say.
your mother sighs,
"Melody you have to stop playing around and start thinking of what you should do because you are a princess after all" your mother says.
"but mother why can't you get one of my other sister to do this why me!" you say trying not to yell.
"they are already looking my child you are the only one not" you mother says as you look to the side.
"Melody it's time to stop acting like a little child and start acting like a princess" she says as you glare at her.
"what if I don't won't to be a princess!" you yell as your mother narrow her eye's.
"you have no choice" she says as you open your mouth to say something.
"and we will not speck of this anymore good night" she says.
you close your mouth and glare at her then swim out and too your room and crash down on your bed with your face in the pillow. your other three sister look at you worried as they swim over and mika pat your back.
"oh melody everything going to be okay" Mika says.
"yeah mother just trying to help you is all" Rika says.
"don't worry everything will turn out for the best" April says.
you pick your head up and hug all three of your sister. "thank you" you say smiling as they smile back then you four go to bed.
When you wake up you yawn and do your morning things then eat and go to May's house and get her. then you two go to the hide-out as you two lay there may look at you.
"Melody is there something wrong you haven't talk much today" May says with worried in her voice as you sigh.
"my mother want me to stop acting this way and start acting like a princess and look for a man" you say as May eyes widen.
"but I don't want too!" you say as you hit the ground out of anger.
"but she just doesn't understand that" you say as May sigh and hugs you. "oh Melody" she says as you hug her back "let go for a swaim okay" May says as you nod smiling a little. you two swim out of the hide-out and around you two talk.
"so do you have your eyes on anyone Melody?" May asked as you look at her. "no, what about you?" you asked as May laughed "same" she says as you two laugh then you two swim from the sea to your's and May's favorite lake.
you two swim around playing tag but when you were about to tag her you heard something and stop. May noticed you stopped as she stops laughing and swim over to you.
"Melody what is it" she ask as you look at her.
"you hear that" you asked as she start to listen so do you.
thats when you two heard laughing and talking.
May gasped,
"yeah but what is it" May asked.
"the real questen is who is it" you say.
you start to swim to the sore.
"Melody wait!" May says following you as you pop your head out of the water and go behind a rock as May pop out too.
"Melody I don't think we should be doing this" May said.
you look a bit over the rock to see four boys and three girls playing in the water.
well three were one was sitting in the sand watching with a bored look.
May look too and gasp alittle again.
"humans! Melody we should go now, we'll get in trouble if they see us" May says.
you looked at her.
"just a few more minutes and we'll go okay" you say.
May had a uneasy look but nod as you too look back.
you see a boy with black hair that was gel back and brown eye's, a boy with orange hair and black eyes, a boy with red hair and greens eye's and a boy with black with white in it hair and red eye's.
The first girl had blue hair and pink eye's, then next girl had brown hair and brown eye's and the last girl had sea green hair and red eye's.
your eye's were on the boy with red eye's who was sitting in the sand there was something about him you wanted to know about him, and wanted to know who he was.
"hey hiei come on and get in the water already!" the boy with the gel back hair yell as the boy glare at him.
"hn" he say's turn and looking the other way you smile a bit.
Hiei so that his name you thought.
"Melody come on, oh no melody that boy looking this way!" May says pulling you to the side as your eye's widing.
you two go back under water and swim till your back to the sea, you two are breathing hard.
"do you think he saw us" may asked panting.
you looked at her still panting
"I hope not" you say as may sighed.
"come on" she says as she start to swim away you look behind you and smile.
"melody!" May yell as you take one last look then swim over to May as you too start to swim back home.
There I hope this is better and more easier to read and I hope you enjoy this story better now.