the first two lines of this poem i wrote them like last year and the rest of it i finished it this year.
You're deep and wounded
By my blade
I wish I could take it al back
I see life slipping out of you
Did you get what you deserve?
Because I have my regrets
Now you won't come back
And I can't see you anymore
Did I get what I deserve?
It was all make-believe
But it felt so real
I never wanted it to end
Now that it's over
I don't ask for redemption
Promise me one thing
Don't ever leave me
Continue to haunt my dreams
I'll bury you in these lands
And I'll forever be with you
i can do guy's pov poems but i'm not saying i'm good at it. when it's something hopeful i can't do it. this is kinda uplifting but very angsty so yeah guy's pov isn't too hard for this. i don't expect anyone to think this was good. one friend said it was though.
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