Thunder clapped from the heavens sending down rain falling down,
cooling my body. He had finally showed, a man about twenty years old,
brown hair, narrow face, and small eyes. The thunder clapped again as he
stood there smirking at me.
"We can stand here all day or you can do what you came here to do." I said
"Well since you insist." The man said rolling up his wet sleeves revealing rippling forearms. It was apparent that this guy worked out as he took a normal karate stance. I bowed to him, my right fist in the palm of my left hand, a standard prodcedure for a Kung Fu student telling his opponent that he will fight if he has to.
Maybe I should back up a bit. See I came home today in a rush to see my girlfriend it being our 3 year anniversary and fond her missing. Now any loving boyfriend would call the police right? Well that's what I did. Galaxy Police officer Lance Mabikii found a note and decided to seeit through… this is why I am now facing the thug in the Japanese school outfit (I found this out from my cousin Kiyone)
The man charged at me, but I kept my stance. He threw a few punches but it was like fighting a turtle. He was just too slow. I easily got behind him and landed a kick to his neck. That calmd him down a good deal as I was able to cuff him.
"You are under arrest for kidnapping and assult on an officer. You have the right to tell me where the hell Candice is now!"
"do ya really think I'm gonna tell a punk ass cop like y'self?" the man replied.
"Why do I get all the hard jobs…" I sighed and pulled out my favorite toy.. the standard issue GP yoyo. "If I'm not mistaken you're Ryo Shenrong am I right?"
He gave me no answer
" I have been ordered to kill you on site if I find you." I took the yoyo and wrapped it around his neck. " Tell me where she is….NOW!!!" I tightend the laser string around his throat cutting the skin a bit.
"Y-you haven't the guts….but I'll tell ya…check the dumpster in the next alley ….but you better hurry before the trash bots come and empty it.." he laughed a loud an d annoying laugh. A laugh that I dispised. I carried out my order. And ran to the alley not far from here. The dumpster was full. I guess I could say that wad a good thing, but now my heart was beating against my chest trying to get out…it wanted to search for its other half. Desperately I clawed through the trash itll I felt something soft. I pulled it out and my heart practically burst. Her face was cold and her lips pale…I place d my hand to her chest, searching for a heart beat…I found none. My knees went weak as I held my love's limp body. The rain poured down harder, like it was trying to wash away what was left of her soul. I held her close to me and cried. Tonight was going to be as special night. But now…
"Lance….Lance?…..LANCE!!!!" I woke up with a start as a golden eyed woman peered into my face.
"Geez warn me when you do that ok?" I said sitting up in my bed. "Besides, shouldn't you be with Tenchi or something?
"nah" she said. Tenchi now hides in the mornings, knowing that we'd all rush in to be the firs tone he sees in the morning.
"I see" I said. "so this is the guy my cousin was going after…" I thought. Kiyone was an awesine cop, even better than me, but because of her no good partner (though amazingly cute) she was dragged down. We were on our way to GPHQ to bring in the apprehended villain Kagato (for what seems like the 10th time)….
Tell me whacha think this is what I wrote during a thunderstorm.if you think its good lemme know and I'll try to continue. If not then I'll leave it as is
Lance Bardock
"We can stand here all day or you can do what you came here to do." I said
"Well since you insist." The man said rolling up his wet sleeves revealing rippling forearms. It was apparent that this guy worked out as he took a normal karate stance. I bowed to him, my right fist in the palm of my left hand, a standard prodcedure for a Kung Fu student telling his opponent that he will fight if he has to.
Maybe I should back up a bit. See I came home today in a rush to see my girlfriend it being our 3 year anniversary and fond her missing. Now any loving boyfriend would call the police right? Well that's what I did. Galaxy Police officer Lance Mabikii found a note and decided to seeit through… this is why I am now facing the thug in the Japanese school outfit (I found this out from my cousin Kiyone)
The man charged at me, but I kept my stance. He threw a few punches but it was like fighting a turtle. He was just too slow. I easily got behind him and landed a kick to his neck. That calmd him down a good deal as I was able to cuff him.
"You are under arrest for kidnapping and assult on an officer. You have the right to tell me where the hell Candice is now!"
"do ya really think I'm gonna tell a punk ass cop like y'self?" the man replied.
"Why do I get all the hard jobs…" I sighed and pulled out my favorite toy.. the standard issue GP yoyo. "If I'm not mistaken you're Ryo Shenrong am I right?"
He gave me no answer
" I have been ordered to kill you on site if I find you." I took the yoyo and wrapped it around his neck. " Tell me where she is….NOW!!!" I tightend the laser string around his throat cutting the skin a bit.
"Y-you haven't the guts….but I'll tell ya…check the dumpster in the next alley ….but you better hurry before the trash bots come and empty it.." he laughed a loud an d annoying laugh. A laugh that I dispised. I carried out my order. And ran to the alley not far from here. The dumpster was full. I guess I could say that wad a good thing, but now my heart was beating against my chest trying to get out…it wanted to search for its other half. Desperately I clawed through the trash itll I felt something soft. I pulled it out and my heart practically burst. Her face was cold and her lips pale…I place d my hand to her chest, searching for a heart beat…I found none. My knees went weak as I held my love's limp body. The rain poured down harder, like it was trying to wash away what was left of her soul. I held her close to me and cried. Tonight was going to be as special night. But now…
"Lance….Lance?…..LANCE!!!!" I woke up with a start as a golden eyed woman peered into my face.
"Geez warn me when you do that ok?" I said sitting up in my bed. "Besides, shouldn't you be with Tenchi or something?
"nah" she said. Tenchi now hides in the mornings, knowing that we'd all rush in to be the firs tone he sees in the morning.
"I see" I said. "so this is the guy my cousin was going after…" I thought. Kiyone was an awesine cop, even better than me, but because of her no good partner (though amazingly cute) she was dragged down. We were on our way to GPHQ to bring in the apprehended villain Kagato (for what seems like the 10th time)….
Tell me whacha think this is what I wrote during a thunderstorm.if you think its good lemme know and I'll try to continue. If not then I'll leave it as is
Lance Bardock