I do not own FLCL, but I don't think anyone will make that mistake. If
I did I wouldn't be writing this. I'd probably be at my giant mansion
playing video games...or sleeping... or eating, which I do all of
those anyways.
Anyways; this story takes place at about the same time as FLCL, but
with a different person whose head "works". Haruko's little sis caused
this one and she's following Haruko to get her guitar back. This
one takes place in America, in a China Town, though, and while this
story focuses on one person there are others (including Naota) across
the world, that have also been bonked. So, on with the story:
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CHP.1 INNOCENCE
As Yoi walked down the street, towards Rei's birthday at Lazzertag
Palace he wondered about what Rei had said earlier.
"You know, or you should know, what M.M. stands for. It's
Multiplex Mini-mall! I bet the mall's scientists have been working on
that robot for a long time, kept it hidden you know, so that when they
finally got finished there would be a lot of hype.
The new Robot, with the letters M.M. printed on its chest (if
a robot could be said to have a chest), at the mini-mall was cool, but
it was way, too, advanced. Even for all the major technological
advances in the past 5 years no one had even come close to designing a
robot like this one.
Voice recognition. Response. Looking. Listening. Recognizing
people. It could even fly! It was cool. It had created lots of hype.
Even Yoi was interested, and that was saying something. But no one not
even Rei's dad, Lance, who was a top government scientist, had come
close to designing anything like the new robot.
It had to come from somewhere else. M.M. probably didn't stand
for Multiplex Mini-mall. No Way!
Multiplex Mini-mall. That was the main mall of the China Town
area, but it was a simple place. It paled in comparison of size to the
new "no-one-knows-what-building" right next to it, but I t was big
enough to keep up with the peoples needs. So where did the robot come
from? What did M.M. stand for?
I think to much thought Yoi.
Soon Yoi came to Parker Dr., the street that Lazzertag Palace
was on. As he walked down the street he looked at the "no-one-knows-
what-building" and thought. He thought so hard he didn't notice when
he walked into someone.
He landed on his butt and stared at the person he bumped into.
"Oops. Sorry Chi. I was just thinking about... stuff, really
hard," Yoi said.
"Me, too. But you don't have to apologize. It was my fault,"
replied Chi.
Then he noticed she had dropped her book and so did she. Chi
always had a book. So they both grabbed for it and their hands
touched. Their hands shot back and they both blushed. Then Yoi picked
up the book, handed it to Chi, then they both stood up and acted like
nothing had happened.
"So you going to Rei's birthday?" he said, trying to stike up
a conversation.
"Yeah."
Then everything was normal. Since as far back, or very close,
as they could remember they had had a crush on the other. Neither,
however, knew about the others crush and they were both to afraid to
admit it. They were in high-school now, as freshmen, and both had yet
to admit their crush on the other.
As they approached Lazzertag Palace one of the loud noises
that came from the "no-one-knows-what-building" from time to time
escaped into the air.
"Why did they build that place? No one goes in or comes out
and in makes a lot of noise. It's really annoying," wondered Yoi out
loud.
"I don't know. But you're right it is stupid. I wonder too,
but let's not worry. After all, it is Rei's birthday and she won't
want us to show up in the 'thinking mood'. You know she hates that."
They both laughed. The 'thinking mood' occurred all the time.
It happens to everybody, but it happened to them a lot more then
anybody else. They got so deep into thought that they were basically
tuned out to the rest of the world. Actually they really did get tuned
out to the rest of the world, so even if they walked off a cliff they
wouldn't notice. But there were no cliff's near their area so that
wasn't a danger.
Soon they arrived at Lazzertag Palace and Rei's party got
underway. It was a blast for everybody! Lazzertag Palace was always a
blast. There was cake and presents and then came the lazzertag. Then
the teams were formed and the game started. Yoi won, he always did,
and then it was time to go home. Chi's mom came to pick her up and Yoi
stayed awhile after the party playing arcade games. Then he left.
As he was walking home he heard a loud noise coming from
behind him. It sounded like a roaring car engine but like none he ever
heard. He turned to look back and saw...
A WOMAN ON A VESPA WITH A GUITAR AIMED FOR ME he thought. Then
the world went dark.
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So what do you think? Is it good so far? If this story stinks
I'll trash it. So please review. -Hiten Master
I did I wouldn't be writing this. I'd probably be at my giant mansion
playing video games...or sleeping... or eating, which I do all of
those anyways.
Anyways; this story takes place at about the same time as FLCL, but
with a different person whose head "works". Haruko's little sis caused
this one and she's following Haruko to get her guitar back. This
one takes place in America, in a China Town, though, and while this
story focuses on one person there are others (including Naota) across
the world, that have also been bonked. So, on with the story:
********************************************************
CHP.1 INNOCENCE
As Yoi walked down the street, towards Rei's birthday at Lazzertag
Palace he wondered about what Rei had said earlier.
"You know, or you should know, what M.M. stands for. It's
Multiplex Mini-mall! I bet the mall's scientists have been working on
that robot for a long time, kept it hidden you know, so that when they
finally got finished there would be a lot of hype.
The new Robot, with the letters M.M. printed on its chest (if
a robot could be said to have a chest), at the mini-mall was cool, but
it was way, too, advanced. Even for all the major technological
advances in the past 5 years no one had even come close to designing a
robot like this one.
Voice recognition. Response. Looking. Listening. Recognizing
people. It could even fly! It was cool. It had created lots of hype.
Even Yoi was interested, and that was saying something. But no one not
even Rei's dad, Lance, who was a top government scientist, had come
close to designing anything like the new robot.
It had to come from somewhere else. M.M. probably didn't stand
for Multiplex Mini-mall. No Way!
Multiplex Mini-mall. That was the main mall of the China Town
area, but it was a simple place. It paled in comparison of size to the
new "no-one-knows-what-building" right next to it, but I t was big
enough to keep up with the peoples needs. So where did the robot come
from? What did M.M. stand for?
I think to much thought Yoi.
Soon Yoi came to Parker Dr., the street that Lazzertag Palace
was on. As he walked down the street he looked at the "no-one-knows-
what-building" and thought. He thought so hard he didn't notice when
he walked into someone.
He landed on his butt and stared at the person he bumped into.
"Oops. Sorry Chi. I was just thinking about... stuff, really
hard," Yoi said.
"Me, too. But you don't have to apologize. It was my fault,"
replied Chi.
Then he noticed she had dropped her book and so did she. Chi
always had a book. So they both grabbed for it and their hands
touched. Their hands shot back and they both blushed. Then Yoi picked
up the book, handed it to Chi, then they both stood up and acted like
nothing had happened.
"So you going to Rei's birthday?" he said, trying to stike up
a conversation.
"Yeah."
Then everything was normal. Since as far back, or very close,
as they could remember they had had a crush on the other. Neither,
however, knew about the others crush and they were both to afraid to
admit it. They were in high-school now, as freshmen, and both had yet
to admit their crush on the other.
As they approached Lazzertag Palace one of the loud noises
that came from the "no-one-knows-what-building" from time to time
escaped into the air.
"Why did they build that place? No one goes in or comes out
and in makes a lot of noise. It's really annoying," wondered Yoi out
loud.
"I don't know. But you're right it is stupid. I wonder too,
but let's not worry. After all, it is Rei's birthday and she won't
want us to show up in the 'thinking mood'. You know she hates that."
They both laughed. The 'thinking mood' occurred all the time.
It happens to everybody, but it happened to them a lot more then
anybody else. They got so deep into thought that they were basically
tuned out to the rest of the world. Actually they really did get tuned
out to the rest of the world, so even if they walked off a cliff they
wouldn't notice. But there were no cliff's near their area so that
wasn't a danger.
Soon they arrived at Lazzertag Palace and Rei's party got
underway. It was a blast for everybody! Lazzertag Palace was always a
blast. There was cake and presents and then came the lazzertag. Then
the teams were formed and the game started. Yoi won, he always did,
and then it was time to go home. Chi's mom came to pick her up and Yoi
stayed awhile after the party playing arcade games. Then he left.
As he was walking home he heard a loud noise coming from
behind him. It sounded like a roaring car engine but like none he ever
heard. He turned to look back and saw...
A WOMAN ON A VESPA WITH A GUITAR AIMED FOR ME he thought. Then
the world went dark.
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So what do you think? Is it good so far? If this story stinks
I'll trash it. So please review. -Hiten Master