Hey this is rhy190 I know its been a while I just been thinking I've been going too fast in my story so let me start over.
Spyro awoke with his head throbbing and his ears ringing. When he opened his eyes they were met with a blur of bright colors. As they cleared hey saw a wide valley with many flowers that awed him in beauty. As he slowly turned his head (you see his neck was hurt) he glimpsed Cynder smiling strangely at him but as soon as she saw his gazing eyes she averted hers. He shrugged it off assuming it was only because they defeated Malefor.
"Hey….Cynder you…don't...Uh...Happen to know where…we are do you?" asked Spyro.
"No….are you ok Spyro?" asked cynder concerned.
"I'm...fine just a little tired." Replied Spyro
"Ok we better find shelter before dawn."
She pauses looking at Spyro concerned "Can you manage?" she asked
"I'll be fine lead the way". Said Spyro putting on a smile but it was easily seen through.
Cynder got up and stretched her soar wings. Spyro had a little more difficulty getting up it felt like a grublin squeezing him with all his might. Spyro stretched his wing muscles aching in protest but he flapped his wings any way. The lift of his wing pulled him off the ground and the adrenalin feeling of flight filled his body. (Cynder was already in the air by this point.)
Cynder pov
Cynder was noticing in the flight that Spyro was slower than usual which was strange because she had never seen him tired. She was searching franticly for shelter.
"Hey Spyro what about that cave." She called over her shoulder.
It was a small cave carved out by centuries of wind and water.
Spyro examined the cave.
"Good job Cynder." He said tiredly.
"I try" she said shrugging
Cynder saw Spyro lie down in the cave exhausted.
"I'll go hunt for us you rest." Cynder said kindly.
"No I'll help." He said trying to get up but failing.
"Spyro." she said
"Ok Cynder I'll stay." He said
Cynder lifted her body with her wings and flew to a nearby forest and perched on a tree branch.
She wasn't focused on hunting though. She kept thinking about Spyros broad body, the movement in flight, and his eyes she couldn't stop thinking about his eyes. (Obsessed hu.)
Suddenly out of the cloak of green leaves a rabbit bounced into view she sprang but missed. It ran through two trees she couldn't fit through.
"Man she mumbled. She went back to her perch and waited. Almost immediately a plump thrush was searching for food. She killed it and after thirty minutes a blue jay sang its heart out.(literally.)
She finely had enough food to bury her hunger.
Spyro pov
Spyro was fast asleep (not that light sleep that you wake easily up from it's the type your really ASLEEP.)
Until he felt a claw tap him on the shoulder. He slowly awoke but not willingly.
"Cynder five more minutes." He said groggily
"Come on Spyro you need strength." She said amused
"Fine" Spyro said slightly awake
He got up noticing immediately he was less tired. Cynder placed the prey in a pile and Spyro cooked it(burnt blue jay any one). They ate ravenously until the deep void in there stomach was filled.
"Hey Spyro remember when we were in the core and you released some of your power" cynder asked blushing.
"Ya that's why I'm so exhausted" he said smirking.
She put on a smile (this again)
"Ya ha any way (straight to the point) did you hear anything down there maybe a voice?" she said blushed
"No why" he asked puzzled
"Oh nothing it probably was just my ears fooling me" she said disappointed.
How could he not hear me after a built up all that courage and said the three words
He couldn't tell him now.
"We should leave soon to find Warfang." Spyro said confidently
"Ok witch way do we go?" asked Cynder
"North" Spyro guessed
Cynder trusted him with her life.
As they were about to Depart something strange happened the sun was being blocked like a eclipse but bigger there was no part of the sun visible whatever it was it lasted thirty seconds.
"What was that?" asked cynder slightly panicked
"I don't know." Said Spyro
"But it's probably nothing."Spyro said
(well well I think it's better than the original)