Hi there... Let me rant for a minute...
Dear 'jeyna is the best' who said 'i hated it it was the worst one ever piper is a bitch' on my other story Pain.
You're fail flame made me laugh my ass off. I think you forgot that you do indeed have a brain, no matter how small it may be, but I'm assuming you know how to type like a proper person. You forgot that 'I' and 'Piper' are proper nouns and they are in need of capitalization. And you also forgot what a period is. You know… Those dots? They go after you write a sentence. You clearly forgot three.
In conclusion, I'll take you flame seriously when you learn grammar.
Also, dear 's' who said 'go fuck your ass'
I can't fuck my own ass because I don't have a penis. Actually, even if I did have a penis I still wouldn't be able to fuck my own ass. It's impossible. But nice try, you still made me laugh.
Both of you, learn how to flame then try again. And have the guts to log in so I can go see how shitty your stories are.
But anyways, I write this story a while ago before you two even flamed and I'm just posting it now. Please enjoy.
You rule over a cabin. Sort of.
She's gorgeous.
And you… You're just you.
He's known her since he was twelve.
You've known him less than a year.
About eight months to be exact.
You feel like you've known him for longer, but those memories are fake,
{A figment or your imagination}
Even if they seemed so real
They fought a war together.
You went on one quest with him
-One measly quest-
No matter how real those meteorites looked,
They weren't.
No matter how real that kiss felt,
It never happened.
She's Reyna Daughter of Bellona, Praetor of the twelfth legion,
[What an official title]
And you… You're plain ole' Piper Mclean, daughter of Aphrodite.
You're normal,
She's like some sort of exotic goddess or something,
You would too if you lived up to the family's name and wore makeup.
She attracts boy's like flies to honey,
Sadly, yours is falling for her.
And no matter how hard you wish,
You aren't her.
You aren't the one he wants,
You're just his friend.
She's Reyna
And you, you're just Piper.
Plain old Piper.
*EDIT* 14/06/12
Hey there! Along with a few other stories I fixed this up... There wasn't many mistakes in this, I just wanted to edit the punctuation a bit. That's about it...
-Empty Thoughts