This is my first fanfic, so please have mercy on me. May contain spoilers, so you may or may not want to read.
Chapter 1
Where am I? I thought.
I was lying on the ground completely lost. Then my senses started to come back to me. I was lying on the ground in the Burning Plains. My sword was just out of my reach. I had been knocked in the head and now I was lying on the ground.
The battle raged around me. I got up and picked up my sword. I had to find Nasuada. I looked everywhere, but I couldn't find her.
Where IS she? I thought.
Then I heard someone shouting. They were shouting "A ship! A ship is coming up the Jeit River!" I looked at the river and, sure enough, there was a ship coming up the river. Then I spotted Eragon and Saphira flying toward the ship. Eragon stopped there a moment then came back.
There was something rising on the enemy's side. It was a dragon! Galbatorix had gotten another egg to hatch! I ran toward the Rider and Dragon just as Eragon and Saphira shot after them. I got there as Eragon was fighting the Rider. I saw the Dragon and it had red scales that were as bright as rubies.
"You!" Eragon shouted as he ripped the helmet off the other Rider. It was him. The man I had thought to be dead. The man I was in love with. It was Murtagh. Son of Morzan. And now he was a Rider loyal to Galbatorix.
"Murtagh!" I yelled.
"Stay out of this, Adora!" said Eragon, but I ignored him. I walked up to Murtagh and looked at him. He looked at me then turned back to Eragon who he had held by magic and unable to move.
Eragon started to tell Murtagh that he didn't have to follow Galbatorix. That he could come to this side. Murtagh laughed and said that that was impossible. That he and Thorn- his dragon- had sworn loyalty to Galbatorix in the Ancient Language. Then Murtagh told Eragon about who his father was. Who their father was. Eragon didn't want to believe it. Then Murtagh took Zar'roc from Eragon and said that the sword should have gone to the eldest brother , not the Murtagh looked at me.
"You're coming with me ." he said. I opened my mouth to protest, but he grabbed me. Eragon tried to protest as well, but he already had me on Thorn and we were rising above the ground.
Yeah I know it kinda leaves stuf wide open, and I leaves stuff out. It's probably really confusing. I promise the rest of the chapters will be better. I hope.
