WARNING Most of the main characters are MY original characters but don't worry... the mane six are included with some other well known (or not so known) are included
Hidden Secrets
Chapter 1: Vortex (sorry so short working on second chapter now)
I ran through the damp alley, darkness surrounding me. I stopped to take a breath, when my stomach growled, warning me of its growing hunger. I sighed, only a few minutes ago I had some oats. The dark hood of my cloak fell off as my horn glowed with changeling magic. A few ponies at the end of the alley turned to look.
"Did you see that light?" one asked. I quickly shut off my magic.
" I'm sure it was nothing, I mean what pony would want to do magic in a creepy alley, anyways." replied the female pony standing next to him. She flipped her mane and continued on, quickly followed by the other.
"That was close.." I muttered to myself. Quickly I stepped back deeper into the shadows so I was completely concealed from view. My horn lit up with magic once more. Why did my magic have to glow so bright? It would be almost blinding if I wasn't hidden in the shadows. I prepared to cast a spell to hold off my hunger for a few hours, but it would take to much energy that I didn't have. My magic dimmed until it went out completely. I growled softly to myself, why did I have to be part changeling? I knew what I needed to stop the hunger and I didn't like it. The only thing I needed was key to my survival, it was love.
(end of chapter 1)
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