A.N. Ok I need some help with my writing can ya'll give me some advice to help me. I'm writing these short stories for practice to get ready to actually start a longer story I have tons of ideas flowing threw my head and before I type them out I want to make sure my writing is good enough.
Also if you are one of the people who reviewed thank you for your thoughts and I'm sure it will help me alot.
Thank you for your time. ^_^