Heyo readers, it's LegionZ here bringing you another Pokémon fanfic! This is another betrayal fic, and this is a remake of The Aura of Betrayal. I got a lot of biased reviews going positive and negative. Mostly the negative was for nuking Hoenn in my last version.
(Heh… Oops.) This story is revised completely from scratch.
BTW, I'm getting some advice from another person on fanfiction, and I think I may have mentioned him in TBR (The betrayed rises) in the final chapter.
Red the Pokémon Master is helping me get this story done. So thanks bro in advance!
Additional Notes about this story that will be helpful to know:
Pokémon CAN use more than one more
Some moves are unrealistic
Ash is freakin OP (Well You already should have guessed that)
This is a Betrayal Fic, those who have sided with Ash or turned against him are included either in chapter one or discussed in later chapters
Uploads are 100% random. IDK when I can get uploads out, so I really have no idea when I plan to upload chapters.
Chapters may be pretyped.
Chapter length's also Vary. Some chapter may be shy of 2,000 words, while others may bypass 5,000.
That's all I can think of for now… If you want, leave a review and I may get back to you. It could be awhile because I'm pretty busy with School, Baseball, Trickshotting, and my Girlfriend. (Lol)
Just PLZ be patient when waiting for chapters! Hopefully you guys like this fanfic!
Final Note: This chapter starts with a time skip…
LegionZ Presents to you…
The Aura Of Betrayal… An Ash/Skyla Fanfic…The Remake
The whole Pokémon world seemed at peace for the time being. The grass was green, birds chirping, sun shining, and trainers talking. This was the Sinnoh region's Lake Valor and Sunnyshore city. Girls in Bikini's, guys without shirts on, surfing, sandcastle's, you name it. However, on the coast of ACTUAL lake valor, a tournament was being set up.
"How long is it going to take?" An old man with an extremely long beard asked anxiously.
"Er… I would say two months at best. Our other locations are still getting ready, this tournament will go down in history!" A worker said half worriedly, half cheerily.
The older man was not amused as much. "It won't go down in history if this facility isn't put up quicker!" He retorted, clearly pissed off.
Charles Goodshow was currently chewing the lead construction worker of the project, FOLT. It stood for Facility Of Legendary Tournaments. The project was proceeding slowly around not just lake valor, but each of the other locations of the tournament. This tournament was legendary, because it was the only tournament ever in Pokémon world history to have a tournament that was based in each region.
The first round of the tournament is in Lake Valor, Sinnoh. The second round is in Petalburg City, Hoenn. The third is in the Cinnabar Islands, or the Seaform Islands in the Kanto Region. The fourth round is in Lumiose City, Kalos. The fifth round is in the Lake of Rage, Johto region. The Final Round was in Nimbassa City, Unova.
This tournament didn't really have a name. Whoever won would be considered to be "The Best of the Best." Champions weren't allowed to participate, and only those whom Charles Goodshow chose to invite were allowed to participate in this competition. 64 competitors were invited, and if someone couldn't make the tournament or chose not to enter, other people were back-ups.
Each battle had a period in between. Two weeks after the first round happened, the second round would commence. Then, two weeks later for the third, so on and so on. The first two rounds were three on three battles. The next two rounds were double battles, four Pokémon maximum. The finals and the semi-finals were 6 on 6.
Charles Goodshow had already sent out all of the applications, and almost half had came back accepting. Though he was highly unhappy about doing so, he still had to send and accept invites from three people he disliked more than anyone. Why he hated the three, who's names were Max Maple, Misty Waterflower, and May Maple.
But why exactly did he hate these three? This was because they were just a few of the main people whom decided to betray their friend five years prior to the present day, Ash Ketchum.
They had betrayed him for reasons unknown, and got off scot-free. He was a little more than surprised when he saw May attempting to be a trainer, and when she got really good, she began challenging leagues for the champion's spot. She, like Max and Misty, couldn't defeat the leagues, but got farther than the rest of others.
He was sent information of the best trainers registered in every region, and sighed, having no choice but to accept the three, as they were among the top in their region. Charles knew that Ash would be a true legend if he had stayed with training. But ever since the betrayal, he didn't even know if anyone would ever see Ash again.
He had vanished after the…Incident… five years ago. Nobody knew where he went. Other strange events that occurred after the betrayal in Pallet town were among the following.
One year after the betrayal, Ash's twin brother, Onyx, had decided to go after him and try to find him. He never came back from searching, though Delia Ketchum refused to speak with the press concerning the matter.
One year after that, there was a breakout in the mutation lab. The rumor going around was that it was from Team Rocket's secret base. Apparently, there was a major lab test, seeing if they could combine normal, everyday Pokémon with supposedly unbeatable, half Pokémon, half humans. Somehow, there were ten of these humans and supposedly team rocket found all of them and got them to one spot. These Half Pokémon, half humans, were not half Pokémon. It Actually was a human with strange powers, it had nothing to do with a Pokémon, but nobody knew that. Nonetheless, the experiment failed, and everything supposedly went Haywire.
The test subjects escaped and apparently were never found.
One year after that, Team Rocket became better known by causing a serious of murderous attacks. They showed no signs of the lab failure a year earlier, so people decided that it wasn't them who caused the lab failure.
Security was increased after that, and incidents of team rocket slowly began to die down. Eventually, there was almost no attacks anywhere.
The last two years had been rather peaceful, and a year ago Charles decided to have the tournament that bested all others. Charles wished Ash was here to participate in the tournament, but everyone thought he was dead. As a matter of fact, Charles thought he was dead too.
Pokémon moves were being sent everywhere. Fire erupting left, water flowing right, wind coming from behind, all over moves were being used. Finally, someone said.
"Okay Guys… that's enough. Break Time." A teenager with raven-like darkish brown hair, dark brown eyes and stood at about 5" 8". The Pokémon obeyed their trainer and sat around, doing nothing in particular.
A powerful, almost human-like psychic type Pokémon came over to the trainer and began to communicate telepathically with it. As he was talking, two more figures entered the room.
"So… another sharp day of training?" A voice asked him.
Onyx Ketchum turned, ending the telepathy, to see whom was asking him the question. "Yeah, another good day. Working on Mega Evolution for Blaziken right now, gonna need some time but I know we'll get there." He said confidently. He turned to the figure who had dark brown, almost black hair, deep auburn eyes, and a hair style exactly matching his own. "So Ash, how was your training?" Onyx asked his twin brother.
Ash grinned. "Good Day so far. Infernape just achieved his special ability, and he's taking endless water right now Greninja. Greninja isn't shooting the water full power, but just by taking the amount of Hydro Pump he's taking in is unbelievable." He said.
"How bout you Silver?" Onyx turned to the other figure.
Silver had near silver colored hair, though he was just two years older than Ash and Onyx. Silver couldn't remember his last name, or anything about himself, so they just called him Silver. His hair was spiked slightly in the air, and he was 5"10", the same height as Ash. He was the test subject from Team Rocket's experiment. After he escaped, he and the other test subjects ran away, team rocket hot on their heels. He was much more strong and powerful than the others, and when they came across a major gorge, they all attempted to jump across it.
It was nearly a hundred feet across. Naturally, a normal person couldn't jump ten. However, their powers enhanced their ability to jump, but only by 50-70 feet. Silver, however, was able to jump over 100 and landed safely across. His mate, Amber, was among those who couldn't jump the hundred feet. She fell into the gorge along with 4 others, which was said to have no escape. Silver was positive that though their powers enhanced some things, you couldn't survive that long of a fall, which was over 1000 feet down.
He was the only one across, the four who didn't fall down caught the walls of the rocky gorge, but they couldn't climb because Team Rocket didn't see silver 1000 feet away and hidden slightly due to the nighttime and trees, but with the test subjects wearing white, even in the slight moonlight they were walking ducks.
They called out their Pokémon and sent them down into the gorge below, never to be seen again. Silver was the only surviving member of the ten test subjects. After he had escaped, he ran to Mt. Silver for a chance to recover the events he had endured. That was when he met Ash and Onyx. After getting to know them better, Silver decided to reveal himself a bit more to them, letting them know of who he was and what he went through.
He thought they would kick him out for being a freak, or test dummy or something. To his surprise, they only welcomed him in more. Ash explained what had happened to him, and Silver realized that this was where he belonged. He caught some Pokémon after Ash explained what to do, since Silver only knew his first name, and the event that happened to him. Eventually, over the course of two and a half years of constant everyday training, Silver got really good.
"Went Well Onyx. I'm still surprised what happened to Charizard, but I helped Vaporeon's Scald get to the power where it can nearly melt rocks." He said.
Silver had a Charizard that had a "Bro Bond" with Ash's Charizard. They could almost feel each other's feelings. When Ash's Charizard returned to him just before the betrayal, A second Charizard in the Valley where Ash's Charizard came from could sense when it was needed. For two years it waited, until the day Silver decided that he wanted to be a trainer.
It was then that that same Charizard flew to meet the other Charizard, and his soon to be trainer, Silver.
They lived in a building that seemed to be abandoned when Ash had got there, but looked amazing currently. It was originally a storehouse, but the AC still worked, and there was plenty of space and surprisingly, food and water. There was crates and crates of supplies inside the storeroom, and Ash knew he had struck it Jackpot.
He spent the first week there fixing it up so the lighting worked and he got a bed and all that. Then, he built a small training… "Never Mind." ~ Author
(Lol I shouldn't say much more cause that will be explained soon)
Ash, Silver, and Onyx walked over to the window that overlooked all of Mt. Silver, and Ash said aloud. "Five years ago on this day… I was betrayed by some of those I held most dear to me, even my own mother."
They both looked at Ash, who had tears in his eyes. Ash then looked up in determination and each hand reached into each of his pockets, and took out a letter from each, handing one to Onyx and one to Silver. They looked confused and began to open it while Ash continued.
"I swore on that day that I would take things they loved away from them… gain revenge for the pain they caused… and prove what kind of a trainer I am. A Legend. I never found an opportunity to prove anything." Ash said calmly. He turned to face both of his companions, who had stunned looks plastered on their faces.
Silver looked like he was about to say something, but Ash stopped him. "Today, I was given an opportunity to get back what I lost, all of us were given an opportunity."
Ash whipped out an identical letter that Onyx and Silver had in thier hands and said firmly. "And we will gain revenge on those who hurt us. Whether it comes easy…"
Ash held out the letter. "…Or Not."
Dear Mr. Satoshi,
Your Performance recently in Pokémon tournament's have been near flawless, literally. You have been formally invited to participate in a legendary tournament. This tournament doesn't have a name yet. You will be considered to be the best of the best if you emerge victorious against all competitors. Just 63 others shall be in this tournament, so this is quite a once-in-a-lifetime chance!
Your Spot is being held. If you do not respond back within three weeks from the date listed below, your response will be considered as Declined. I urge you to accept it, but it is your choice. If you choose to enter this tournament, Please go to Lake Valor in the Sinnoh region for round one. This tournament begins June 21st, please be here at least a month early. Any more details on this tournament will be explained when you arrive.
Thank You,
Charles Goodshow
So how was that?
I thought it was pretty sharp.
Skyla won't be included till later chapters, though I would expect lemons much later.
Next Chapter is explaining the betrayal, and includes those who did betray Ash.
That's all! PLZ Review, Follow, Fav!
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