A/N: Well this is my first time trying this constructive criticism only.
Disclaimer: I am not rich. If I owned RWBY I would be
Tristan POV:
"Tristan you're our best pilot we need you to do this." A commanding voice was saying to me, "I have a life outside the air force, a girlfriend even!" I exclaimed, "Sorry permission to speak freely sir?" He nodded to indicate that I could under the circumstances. I then continued with, "Well then sir, not to be disrespectful, but you want me to go forward in time three billion years at least?! This is crazy not to mention insane. And I know a thing or two about insane because I get up every day thinking 'Tristan you are freaking crazy for getting into that cockpit you are going to get yourself killed' so tell me why should I do this again?" "Well" he said in a completely calm voice, as if he wasn't suggesting that I walk through a FREAKING HOLE IN REALITY!, "We need to have a military presence in the future not only are you our best pilot you also have a large collection of older military and civilian use planes we would be willing to outfit you with everything you need to keep up you collection as well as making a sizable donation of our new military jets, your favorites, if you don't do it it'll have to be Smith." Smith!" I shouted, "He shouldn't be allowed to fly a civilian helicopter let alone something like the F35 Lightning! Come to think of it my Girlfriend has been cheating on me with Smith no less I'll do it but I expect an SR-71 Blackbird." "Alright" he said "you have one week until we start getting you ready take this time off"
Spooky time change: Later that week, Tristan's house
Sarah (Tristan's Gf) POV
Smith and I were enjoying a nice glass of wine in the living room when my boyfriend gets home and says "Sarah I'm home, don't bother shoving Smith out the window, it crushes the petunias, but smith doesn't matter because I'm doing something I should have done when you started seeing Smith I'm breaking up with you." "What!" says I "whys that?" he looks at me like I'm stupid and says "Your cheating on me Sarah on a side not get your stuff out of my house, thank you." So I start packing my stuff when I'm done three or four hours later Tristan comes in and says "good get in your car and leave here's a sandwich for the road" handing me a PB&J sandwich, needless to say I left.
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