This story will still be a Tenten/Naruto but yea it will also be a I hate Sakura one because I do hate her but it wont be bluntly obvious. Also it will start a little early so yea have fun reading. I may still have the poems though.
Chapter 1
"IRUKA HE'S A DEMON NOTHING MORE" yelled a Jounin with a Senbon in his mouth "look Genma I wont argue with you anymore, we've been friends for a good five years now please take my word for it watch him for one day and you will change your mind I grantee it" pleaded Iruka "fine one day no more no less if I do not change my mind you pay for the next meal" said Genma as he threw some money down onto the Ramon counter and left.
"You think he'll change" asked Ichiraku "I hope so Ichiraku…I hope so" said Iruka as he placed some money onto the counter and left "as do I Iruka-san he could use more people to care for him…kami Yondaime why give such a young kid such a big burden?" asked Ichiraku as he looked up.
With Genma
'I can't believe I'm doing this' thought Genma as he saw a nine year old Naruto leave the academy.
With Naruto
'please don't let them see me today please don't" Naruto kept repeating this in his head as he walked past a group of boys seven total from the academy except these boys were two years ahead of him. "Hey it's the brat" said one boy as the rest looked they smirked as they saw him walk by. "HEY LOSER" yelled one boy but Naruto kept on walking "HEY WE ONLY WANT TO TALK" yelled another boy as they caught up with him.
"You know it's rude to ignore one who is speaking to you" said one boy as he blocked off Naruto's path. "So-sorry I'm in a hurry" stuttered Naruto as he tried to walk past the boy only to be punched in the stomach as he walked by and pushed into another one of the boys who laughed and held Naruto so that he couldn't move.
"Now lets have some fun" laughed one boy as he punched Naruto in the face "LET ME GO" Naruto cried out only for it to fall on deaf ears as another punch went to his gut. "LET ME GO OR ELSE" yelled Naruto as he started to struggle. "Hmm don't bother you wont get lose" said another boy who went to punch Naruto in the face only to hit the person who was holding Naruto because Naruto moved his head just enough for the punch to miss. The boy who was holding Naruto got knocked out cold and let go of Naruto. Since the boys were surprised Naruto was able to punch one before the rest started to gang up on him.
Ten minutes later
Naruto lay on the ground watching the boys as they walked away "I hate them" whispered Naruto as he pushed himself up only to fall back down, but he kept on trying and eventually got up after about five minutes. "Well better get to training" said Naruto as if nothing happened and started to walk (more of limp) to the forest.
With Genma
'Now where is he going' he thought as he jumped from building to building following Naruto.
With the third
The third sat there looking into his glass ball to see Genma following Naruto 'Hmm best go see what he is up to' thought Sarutobi as he disappeared in a puff of smoke.
With Naruto
"Ok time to train" said Naruto as he started to take out some kunai and shuriken and throw them at an already made target on a tree. One after another he threw the ninja weapon only for them to either miss the target completely of bounce off the target do to not enough force pushed into the throw. "ARRRGGHHH why can't I do it like the others…I guess that's enough target practice, lets try bushin no jutsu and Kawarimi no jutsu" Naruto said the last part more cheerfully and then started to do some seals and yelled "Bushin no jutsu" there was a puff of smoke and when that smoke cleared there were two dead looking bushins "not again" after the clones disappeared Naruto did some more seals "Kawarimi no jutsu" shouted Naruto there was another puff of smoke and after that smoke cleared Naruto stood where he was a minute ago "why can't I do these stupid jutsu's" cried Naruto as he tried again and again to get them right.
With Genma
"Why does he try this hard and not give up" asked Genma to himself "you know the Yondaime once said that 'a good ninja knows when to give up, but a great ninja know to never give up'" said Sarutobi as he appeared next to Genma. "Yea…I guess you're right but he will never get those Jutsu's with that kind of chakra control Hokage-sama" said Genma "then why do you not teach him" asked the Third "because he's" Genma was cut off by Sarutobi "a demon, right…(sigh) let me ask you is he not like you?" Asked Sarutobi as he lit his favorite pipe "how is he like me" "Naruto has no parents like you, the village thinks that Naruto will amount to nothing later on in life like they thought of you just because you two had nobody to teach you. Naruto wears a mask that hides all his pain until he gets home that is when he cry's when no one can see him, correct me if I'm wring but did you not do the same?" stated Sarutobi "really hmm I might give him more then one chance but I still wont change my mind just yet." "That is all I ask is to give the boy a chance" and with that Sarutobi disappeared with a swirl of leaves.
With Naruto
"Why can't I do this right" yelled Naruto as he fell to the ground from exhaustion "its not that you can't do it it's that you have to much chakra to do it" said Genma as he leapt from a nearby tree. "What do you mean, how can you have to much chakra to do something" asked Naruto as he turned over so that he was laying on his back staring at Genma "well you see your chakra control is bad and that putting it lightly to be able to do the bushin jutsu you will need the control that will rival Hyuuga Hiashi, to make this easier think about a bucket of sand and then you need to think of trying to grab one grain of sand though not impossible it is very hard to do. That is how your chakra works now I can teach you a bushin technique that you can do easier as for the kawarimi no jutsu well we'll need to work on your control itself for that" said Genma as he offered his hand to Naruto to pick him up. "But that is for tomorrow meet me here after school so we may begin" 'Kami I hope I'm making the right chose' thought Genma as he helped Naruto up "lets get you home" and with that they walked off
End
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