I have rewritten this chapter.
Flashback: "Gregor, take your sisters to the bunker." Grace yelled.
"No, I can't leave you here you'll be killed." Gregor shouted back.
"Better me than you." Grace yelled "now go."
Gregor ran as fast as he could. "Lizzie" he shouted.
Gregor looked around people where crowding the bunker. The sun was soon to set and people began to go to the dorms.
The structure of the bunker was strange, it was two levels top level was filled with soldiers with chain guns. The middle was wider and again with soldiers but armed with flamethrowers instead. The middle had dorms for the men and women civilians, which had heavy doors with big steel doorknobs.
The in the middle was a spiral staircase that lead to a network of underground tunnels connecting to other bunkers and supplies.
Gregor started crying, both his mom and his dad had been murdered by aliens he'd never even seen, and he now lived in this hellhole for the rest of his life. "Perfect" he thought.
Two weeks later.
"Snake tails" he heard a soldier say on his radio. "Uh oh" Thought Gregor "Snake Tails" the marine repeated a little louder..
'Snake Tails' are the nicknames for the monstrous aliens that are known for tearing up earthly elements in a matter of seconds with there club-like tails then killing scores more with there scythed arms.
"Lizzie" Gregor shouted "what." answered a small voice. "Get Margret and your best pair of shoes. "why?" questioned Lizzie. "Because where leaving soon."
Lizzie did as she was instructed and soon the Aliens came into the open for all to see.
Gregor held up two of the soldiers sidearms which he had snatched from there holsters.
The creature approached at unimaginable speed for there size and smashed the bunker into dust fairly quickly and were soon attacking everything including each other although there carapaces were to tough on the back to injure one another. Gregor ran and shot, his rager senses fully in gear,while Lizzie ran ahead carrying Boots.
With Lizzie carrying Margret close behind him he managed kill one beast and injure another but by now they started following him for he was obviously the biggest threat to any and all of them.
Gregor somehow managed to make it to central park without being killed. He managed to limit the beasts down to six and as Lizzie opened the rock the snake tails sensed a slight distraction from the enemy and took that as there opening to slither at full speed while the human male turned his attention away from them to jump the glided right up to him and stabbed him in the chest.
The snake tail could hear his heart slowing to a stop. Dead.
Gregor fell limp into the hole. Dead.
Don't worry he's not dead forever just until I get two reviews.