snaje was wajking out in the army fiht zone. their wear ome big robos from the game but he ignore them becaus they wernot the polbem. their was big poblem.

the metal gears had been steelen. snale was outrace and he went to finded them. he avoded a swarm of dedly psonois zaziban hamserys. i read abut them from internet so i put them ined.

'hah ARE YAO LOOK FOR MEYAL GEERS' sayed a solder man. he muts hafe been smarter to now that skake was look for the iporant metal gesrs. 'ull never fund the metal gears'

'yes i wil' and snale got a flamtrower and made him ito a seketon. 'hah finded ur life necks time stuid man.'

'no' he sayed as seketon.

'ok' says skake.

he walks ito a neerby huse. their wa sa man ssleep. he was sleep in him bed.

'WAKE UP' snake says.

'NO' he yels and toses a henade at snake who chop kiks it. 'HAH! I AM DUNG FU'

'uh oh'

'tel me wear is the metal gears'

'their in my firdge.'

'ok' says skale and he opens hte firdje. their was food and geer.

'NO THE GEER IS TRAP YU IDOIT' he says with him bad lugh. 'u wont escape unti the next chapter' thats becaus i cant rite snaje escaping the tarp until neckst chapter to kep you all supense.

the tarp was cold and their was lots of fires. snake new he culdnt tuch the fires or he wood get burn.

'ow ow'

"HOW WIL I GET THE GEARS IN TRAP' says snake. "ILL HAE TO WEGHT'.

the end.

end.

ps how wil SNAKE ECAPE! FIND OUT NECKST CAPTER!