I got my material by combining elements of the game Kirby Air Ride and
Kirby Dream Land (The two I like most), though some of it I made up. I
don't own any of the Kirby characters.
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Kirby and the Legend of Dragoon and Hydra
Chapter 1: Creation
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Long ago, two mighty races inhabited the planet Popstar. They were the Fenex and the Betele. The Fenex was a bird-like species that was captivated by exploring the unknown of Popstar and its surrounding planets. Quite opposite, the Betele loved nothing more than conquering what they did not own and didn't care about the consequences.
The two were constantly at war, trying to find new ways to outdo the other. Many times it was solved through a race. One day it was decided that there was to be a race that would decide who would rule the planet. So the sides went to work on the ultimate rides.
When the day came for the race, the audience was eager to see the one who would be representing them, as well as the competition. The crowd chanted and cheered until the racers were unveiled. Majestically, the Fenex-made ride came down the course. It resembled a phoenix in flight, the national symbol of the Fenex. It seemed to be as fragile as paper, and yet as elegant as a feather. Dragoon.
On the contraire, the Betele ride stormed out of its carrier. The spiked menace was larger than the Dragoon, and stronger, too. It took up two full lanes of the track. Obviously, it was built to destroy the opponent, if worse came to worse. This metallic-green monster was Hydra.
The competitors took their places on the field. The tension between the races had finally reached its climax. There was a hushed silence over the audience. Then the loudspeaker boomed "Racers, ignite your thrusters!" FROOM! The rides hovered about three inches above the ground. All eyes where on the starting lights. Beep, Beep, Beep, Booo! At that tone, the racers ripped off onto the course...
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Please R&R. This is my first fanfiction. I want to know if I should finish it up or not.
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Kirby and the Legend of Dragoon and Hydra
Chapter 1: Creation
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Long ago, two mighty races inhabited the planet Popstar. They were the Fenex and the Betele. The Fenex was a bird-like species that was captivated by exploring the unknown of Popstar and its surrounding planets. Quite opposite, the Betele loved nothing more than conquering what they did not own and didn't care about the consequences.
The two were constantly at war, trying to find new ways to outdo the other. Many times it was solved through a race. One day it was decided that there was to be a race that would decide who would rule the planet. So the sides went to work on the ultimate rides.
When the day came for the race, the audience was eager to see the one who would be representing them, as well as the competition. The crowd chanted and cheered until the racers were unveiled. Majestically, the Fenex-made ride came down the course. It resembled a phoenix in flight, the national symbol of the Fenex. It seemed to be as fragile as paper, and yet as elegant as a feather. Dragoon.
On the contraire, the Betele ride stormed out of its carrier. The spiked menace was larger than the Dragoon, and stronger, too. It took up two full lanes of the track. Obviously, it was built to destroy the opponent, if worse came to worse. This metallic-green monster was Hydra.
The competitors took their places on the field. The tension between the races had finally reached its climax. There was a hushed silence over the audience. Then the loudspeaker boomed "Racers, ignite your thrusters!" FROOM! The rides hovered about three inches above the ground. All eyes where on the starting lights. Beep, Beep, Beep, Booo! At that tone, the racers ripped off onto the course...
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Please R&R. This is my first fanfiction. I want to know if I should finish it up or not.