Here's my new fic reedited

Here's my new fic reedited.This explains some things that I left out
in the original.It's gonna be a horror fic.I got this idea when I
was washing the dishes.Tell me what you think.
Starbuck's Exorcism prologue

Starbuck tripped over a plant and he cursed.The fight in the
Officer's Club preyed on his mind.He didn't know what started it.He
remembered Apollo had said something and he had lost his temper and
punched Apollo.He had stormed out and had climbed in his viper and
launched,ignoring Adama's orders to come back.That's why he was stuck
exploring this dark,dank,smelly planet,There was a smell of rotting
meat in the air,while Apollo and Boomer were safely on the
Galactica.He wondered if Apollo would send a search party to find
him.He tripped over a rock and fell in a patch of mud.He cursed
again,this time more loudly.When he got to his feet,he kicked
the rock angrily.He stumbled on,only for a few paces,when he kicked
something metallic.He bent down and picked it up.It was a black box
with a decorative trim round the edges in a gold metal.
*Lord!I could sell this for some cubits.*Starbuck thought to
himself.He looked around for a bit longer,saw there was nothing else
to see as it was getting dark and he heard an animal growl in the
distance.*Maybe I should get back to the Galactica and face Apollo*He
half walked-half ran to his viper,still holding the box
in his hand.He clambered in his viper and putting the box down on the
floor,launched.He didn't notice the box shaking slightly and then
opening slowly.
To be continued................