A/N Sorry about the terrible first chapter here's my rewrite, and I fixed all the undetailed details… YAY! Please please review and flame! I also want an extremely hard to write plot with an interesting couple! Come on bring on the challenge!

Kiba darted through the allies as fast as his little seven year old legs could carry him, it was his seventh birthday, and he was ordered to go hang at the park for an hour, before coming straight home! He was jumping with excitement; maybe they were baking him a cake! He jumped up the slide, and slid back down on his belly not quite making it to the top. He gave it another try, almost making it, he touched the top, sliding down, he laughed, skin red in the spots that touched the slide. He dashed to the swings, giggling he jumped, landing in the swing, he took off, cheering himself on. He imagined he had been given one of the Inuza dogs, and they were racing, taking off to win a race.

Kiba leaped to the finish line, flying out of the swing set, when he didn't land he opened his eyes, some odd man held him up. "Excuse me; may I please be let down sir?" He said, thinking it was someone worried about him, thinking he was going to fall out. "No." Kiba stared at him, "Um, I need to go home!" He said cheerfully, trying to wriggle free, the man's grip became vise like. "You're not my Okaasan, or my Anechan! Let me go!" He screamed kicking with all his little seven year old might. "You're coming with us." The man said, before everything went black.

Kiba shook his head, eyes blearily waking up, he yawned what a terrible dream, his eyes opened wide, he wasn't in his bed… He was hanging on a wall, odd chains stuck to him. He pulled against them, trying to get them off, "Okaasan!" He screamed, "Ane-chan!" he yelled, tears streaming down his face, the place he was in was dark, and damp, he could see red blotches on the floor, he was frightened, "Mommy! Sister!" He screamed, and started crying, they would save him, and they always did. He had to be strong. He stopped crying, and stared at the floor, they would save him, and he had to believe in them.

When the door banged open, Kiba expected it to be his Okaasan coming in to yell at him for getting caught, instead it was the man from earlier, he screamed, eyes wide, his mom and sis would come any minute now, and beat these men up, he knew they would, they always did. They slowly approached, one forming the hand seals of a jutsu he'd never seen before. "Let's welcome another slut to our ranks." One of them said, the one doing the jutsu. The others smirked, "I call dibs." The one on the right said, Kiba was confused, he trembled in fear, were they going to kill him? Why? Did his Ane-chan or Okaasan hurt someone? He didn't think they did!

"Please let me go misters!" He begged, "I want to go home!" He said, eyes wide, he pleaded with them. They all smirked at him, gazing with an odd look at him, smiling fiercely. He shivered true fear flowing through his body. The man finished his jutsu, and Kiba trembled, unsure of what it did. The men smirked at him, one of them beginning to undress, and the other undressing him, they shredded his clothing, and unlocked the chains, Kiba's feet and hands felt like led. He stood up and clumsily ran towards the door. The man, who undressed, tackled him, pinning Kiba to the ground. "Let me go please Mister!" He begged, and struggled against the man five times his weight. Kiba felt he was too close, and he was getting big down low, Kiba didn't understand why.

Suddenly he was flipped, and held down by two huge hands, and he felt extremely vulnerable, he tried to kick the man, but he was pinned too tightly he cried out in pain as the man's nails dug into his arms. The man suddenly shoved into him, Kiba screamed, tears filling his eyes, "Stop!" He screamed, pain filling him, he felt as if he was being ripped in half. He tried to wriggle free, body in pain, but the man wouldn't stop pounding into his little body. He screamed in pain, screaming for his Okaasan, and Ane-chan, begging them to come save him.

The man rammed in really hard, causing Kiba to scream louder, and then he released, Kiba felt as if his whole body stung, his eyes were red, and tears streamed down his face. The one who undressed Kiba came over, he had his pants off, he sat on Kiba, Kiba whimpered, and he drug his claws across Kiba. Kiba whimpered, "Please stop mister!" He tried one more time, not understanding why these men were hurting him. "Shut up, you little whore and suck!" Kiba had no idea what he meant until something was shoved into his mouth, his eyes widened, Okaasan said never let anyone see your peepee, and here this man was shoving it in his mouth, Kiba shook his head, trying to remove the offending object. The man slapped him, snapping his neck back, tears pricked Kiba's eyes, he couldn't breathe, he began sucking, and the man rammed into his mouth, pulling out and pushing back in, over and over, Kiba was whimpering, as the back of his throat bruised, pain shot through him, he sobbed. The man quickly finished, laughing, "Good little slut." He said, tossing Kiba back at the first man, the two men left.

Kiba shivered, the man dropping him on the ground, "You start tomorrow, here's your outfit." He received a way too skimpy kimono that had a loose tie, he whimpered, "Can I please go home mister!" He begged, not liking this place, men hurt him. "No." The man said, slamming him into the wall, "You are nothing but a worthless slut, meant only to pleasure people!" Kiba whimpered he didn't even know what a slut was, or pleasure, he was so confused. "Now get up!" He was ordered, Kiba couldn't move, his whole body ached, he was kicked, and he stumbled to his feet, and was dragged to a room, it looked clean, but the bed was all messed up. "You start tomorrow, here's your dinner." A piece of bread was thrown at him, Kiba whimpered, crying himself to sleep on the bread, he missed his Okaasan and Ane-chan!

The next day Kiba awoke to two men passing the door, one nodded, and the door was unlocked man entering, he looked to be around forty years old, Kiba wondered if he was as old as Grandpa Hokage, he whimpered backing away, the man followed him, eyes gazing at Kiba, Kiba shivered, feeling dirty, he continued backing away, until he was cornered, "Mister what are you doing?!" He asked scared, the man continued approaching, and Kiba couldn't move, soon he was right next to Kiba, yanking off his loose Kimono. "NO! Stop mister!" He begged, as the man slapped him, "Shut up slut!" He ordered, and Kiba whimpered, "Sluts take it without a sound!" He growled, and Kiba's eyes widened, he understood, a slut took what the men did to him… Why was he a slut?! "I'm not a slut! I have a mommy and a sissy!" He said, trying to wriggle free from the tight corner and get away from the creepy man.

"They don't care about you or you wouldn't be here!" The man growled, dragging him to the bed, he slammed into him, Kiba screamed, "You were probably useless there too!" He growled, pounding into him again and again, Kiba sobbed in pain, and the man backhanded him, "Silence slut!" He growled, and Kiba closed his mouth, tears streaming down his face. He wanted to go home! Why would mommy and sissy not want him?! Didn't they love him?! Why didn't they save him?! Why was he here?! Kiba's seven year old mind couldn't figure out why anyone would want to do that to him, he never did anything bad, sure he teased the puppies, but he was a good boy. He sobbed when the man left, his mommy and Sissy didn't want him!

Ten Years Later

Kiba stretched, muscles sore, he scratched his head, standing up, and playing a sound on his ribs. He looked outside his door, and walked to the bathroom, and when he began walking back, he saw the new little seven year old girl, an old gentleman was in there cornering her, he just took off her robe, Kiba growled remembering his first day, and he darted in, grabbing the man and tossing him off the girl. "Stay away from her!" He hissed, growling fiercely. The man fled the room, and the owners entered as Kiba checked to see if she was alright, wrapping her up in her kimono.

The owners grabbed him harshly bruises appearing almost immediately Kiba whimpered, the girl staring at him thanking him, he smiled faintly, he would get in a hell lot of trouble for this one. They dragged him to the room, he didn't even struggle, they shackled him to the wall, he knew it well, he grimaced, he didn't want to be here again… "Kiba seems you have been misbehaving again." The master stated, "Yes sir." Kiba said meekly, staring at the floor. "You know the punishment. This time you're here for a week." Kiba stared at him, "No! Please!" He begged, eyes wide, the master laughed, "You will get water this time." He smirked and left the room, Kiba's head hung low. He knew better but he just, she was so like him, he sobbed quietly, swearing one day he would escape.

The third day, thirst was starting to overcome him, and the ninjutsu was reacting, and he couldn't curl up. The girl he saved was the one who came in and gave him his first bit of water, she was slightly bruised, but doing ok, "Thank you Kiba san" she said softly, giving him some water, he nodded, eyes averted, he shouldn't have done it. He was yelling at himself, he was a bad slut. He stared at the ceiling, and counted the tiles for what seemed to be the millionth time, it was probably more…

The week was almost over, a few more hours. Kiba panted, the ninjutsu was in full course, he couldn't think straight, his whole body hurt, craving the touch of the men, he whimpered, and heard the door squeak open, and his lifelong tormentors, the three he hated the most walked in. He groaned, whimpering pitifully. "Does Kiba want to be done with his punishment?" One of them talked down to him, and Kiba nodded meekly, "Last time for this incident understand?" The boss ordered, walking out, the other two began the same ritual, dropping him to the ground, "Suck slut!" The one ordered, and Kiba immediately took in the member already ready and leaking, Kiba licked tentatively, before placing his whole mouth around it, he was experienced now, he continued teasing and licking as the man pounded into his mouth. Kiba spat out the cum when the man finished, slapping him across the face. "Swallow it slut!" He hissed, and Kiba grimaced, and the other man grabbed him.

Tossing him to the ground, he was upon him in seconds clawing the hell out of Kiba's sides. Kiba winced whimpering, and the man rammed into him, harder and harder trying to get Kiba to scream, Kiba whimpered, and cried out only once, he was used to the pain, he clamped his eyes shut as the man assaulted his body, he flinched, he was just a slut, he shouldn't think past that. The man finished, and Kiba's insides stung, he didn't say anything, and they left, Kiba lifted his head up, and saw there was a robe in the door way… The door suspiciously opens… He grabbed the robe, and stared around, it was clear twenty feet away was the exit… He looked at all his bruises, he was pretty sure his face looked pretty nasty too… He ran, faster than he knew he could run, he darted through the halls, and open door, straight into the forest, he continued running until he collapsed in a clearing.

Kiba gasped, panting, his ribs sticking out, he groaned he should have grabbed some food, what was he thinking?! He couldn't escape what would he do?! He was a slut, pure and simple, well in his case not so pure, he couldn't do anything, he had to go back… He glanced around, totally lost, "Yeah, I'm screwed." He muttered, head between his knees nausea from lack of food, was finally getting to him.

He sat there for a few hours, trying to figure out what he would do. When a dog happened to wander into the clearing, he stared in shock; the dog had whip marks across its body, everywhere. Kiba watched it slowly approach, and collapse at his feet, "What happened to you my beautiful pup?" He asked, not sure, but puppies seemed familiar, maybe from his life before he was a slave?! He wasn't sure, "What's your name?" He asked quietly, and was shocked to understand a whimpered, "Akamaru." He stared at him, "Akamaru? Beautiful name!" He commented, stroking the dog, he searched around, and grabbed some leaves, he carefully covered the wounds, he carried the pup walking in a random direction. He stumbled across a rode, running right into a man carrying a cart, seemed like food. "Hello? What's a young man doing out here?" He asked, taking in Kiba's appearance, bruised, battered, and carrying an injured dog.

He didn't ask any questions, just made camp and allowed Kiba to eat with him, "Do you need some clothes boy?" he asked quietly watching Kiba, who ate very little, seeming to be satisfied with that, Akamaru on the other hand ate most of Kiba's meal, as Kiba laughed faintly at the pups antics. "So, do you have any money to pay for the stuff?" The man asked calmly, and Kiba looked at him, "I'm… well trained…" he said calmly, knowing his body was the only thing that would be able to pay for any supplies he could obtain. The man shook his head, "No worries, here's some clothes from my younger days. I need to head to Konaha; Naruto will be wanting his Raman soon." He laughed, and packed up his cart, Kiba bowed, changing right there, causing the old man to blush, Kiba noticed he had some pants, a mesh shirt, and a jacket! He was excited, smiling at Akamaru.

The man left waving, and Kiba thanked him, and he and Akamaru headed into the forest, checking out everything there was to explore, he darted in and out of trees, celebrating every time they found some bit of food, berries or nuts. Akamaru yipped happily, "We are free!" Kiba muttered, smiling, as the day passed, they rested in a cave, by the third day, the pangs were coming, Kiba groaned, sitting up, he panted, relieving himself, he hoped that could get him through for a little while. He would have to go back if he couldn't control the jutsu… He and Akamaru went wandering further in; they found a lovely pond and went for a swim. When Akamaru growled, they jumped out, Kiba smelled a scent he was most familiar with, chakra, someone was a ninja near, he and Akamaru took off, grabbing his clothes, but insects swarmed him from nowhere.

A/N Ok, much better than my original one… Sorry about that… Chapter two will be up next time!