Hey there! This is my first story so I'm sorry if it's a bit shaky! I would love some criticisms on how to improve though, thanks!
I didn't put descriptions because i know everyone has there own idea on how someone should look, so i like to let your imagination run a bit with it.
Rarity was walking down the coridor to pick up her friend fluttershy, when she saw a group of fellow slytherins tormenting a poor girl with beutiful golden wings. She quickly realized that the girl curled on the ground with tears running down her face was in fact her hufflepuff friend, fluttershy. She strode over immediately with an air of anger and purpose.
"Excuse me gentle men, but you seem to be bothering this poor girl, why not run along and bother someone else hhmm?" she asked with a flutter of her eye lashes and with a slightly threatening tone. The boys either didn't register the immediate threat or didn't care. "Ha and what are you gonna do about it? Why don't you just run along and sew another dress like a good little house witch" he said with a sneer.
This got the other boys laughing, and Rarity seeing red. "If you do not back away from my girlfriend in two seconds I will show you exactly what i can do with a needle!" she all but growled. The boys looked shocked for a moment, but took the threat seriously, backing away slightly. "Tch whatever, we have better things to do than hang around a freak. Come on" he gestured to the boys and they left skirting around rarity in fear of her making true on the threat.
She glared at them until they were out of sight, once she was positive they were gone Rarity turned all of her attention on to fluttershy. "Darling are you alright? They didn't hurt you did they" she asked as knelt down next to her girlfriend checking over fluttershy for injuries before she could answer. "Oh no im f-fine, d-don't worry about me." she replied as she uncurled from her spot on the floor now that the threat gone.
"Oh fluttershy, I always worry! Ever since your inheritance they've been targeting you more and more and i just can't stand it!" She said while wiping away the tears that stained fluttershys cheeks. "Come on, l-lets go to breakfast before you do something you might r-regret later" Fluttershy jokingly stuttered, getting up once rarity was positive that fluttershy was physically unharmed.
"Dear I could never regret anything I do for you" Rarity said with such a serious and genuine voice that fluttershy couldn't possibly deny it and only smiled as they walked hand in hand to have breakfast with the rest of that friends.