Hello, this is my first story ever on any site so please give me some reviews for this!!

Well, before I start w/ my story I should probably introduce my self and the story...

My name is Matt Ramos I am 15 years old, currently in 10th grade, and I go to Niwot high school. I am a huge fan of megaman, which is why I am writing this fanfic. of course. I like to write stories(duh, I'm writing one...), play video games and sometimes act.

O.K. The story is about Isho Kyozaka (pronounced 'eeshow kee-owzaka') and he just moved to ACDC town with his family from Electopia. He has just recently gotten a PET so he is a beginner at net battling but seems to have an un-given talent at it. His net-navi, Falcman (pronounced 'fawlk' and in tournaments changes his name to "steel falcon") is a flying navi who specializes in using cyber-swords. Isho has a couple friends at school, not many, all of which love to netbattle. His best friend, Darren whom he had met before he ever came to ACDC, and his netnavi, Ironman who specializes in the use of blocking and counter techniques, is Isho and falcman's rivals. His other friend, Kora, is a girl who has a navi, Angelman(she calls him angel for short), but prefers not to net-battle(but does on occasion).Angelman is a holy-type navi who specializes in healing, protecting and status ailment(paralyzing, poisoning, you get the picture) techniques. Well, those are the characters, but the story is basically about Isho and his life around ACDC and the occasional disaster, tournament, or threat to the human race. Yep, typical everyday situations. If I missed explaining anything and some random things pop up in the story that you don't understand, please tell me in your review. Anyways, enjoy the story.

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Isho: yawn What time is it falc?

Falcman: Uhh...Isho? I've been trying to wake you up for the past hour! It's 8:00! You're late!

Isho: 8:00!!!! I'm late for my first day at school! sigh Talk about a good first impression!

Isho runs outside almost forgetting to change his clothes and gets to school as quickly (not as gracefully ) as he can, running into mean dogs, prickly bushes and large poles along the way.

Isho: I'm here!

Ms. Beller: I'm sorry, young man, but what is your name?

Isho: Uhh... my name is Isho Kyozaka... I just moved here from Electown...

Ms. Beller: All right Isho, get to your seat. Try not to be late again, O.K.?

Isho: All right, sorry...

Isho slowly but surely finds his way to his seat.

After a while of lectures and history lessons, Isho starts to get a little sleepy. Within a couple minutes, he is sound asleep at his desk. While he is asleep, he has a dream about net-battling...

Isho dreams he is in the Den city finals and he is fighting against an odd man with a mysterious navi.

???: It's over for you Isho! Go in for the final attack Mediman! Delete Steel Falcon!

Isho: No!!!

Falcman: Don't worry Isho... I can... Ahhhhhh!!

Isho: Falcman!!!

Isho watches in horror as Falcman is deleted by the mystery navi Mediman. Isho is terrified by the immense power of the navi and is too late to tell Falcman to jack out.

Isho: Ahhhhh!!! Falcman, no!!!

Ms. Bella: Isho! Wake up! Wake up!

Isho: Huh? What's going on?

Ms. Bella: Isho Kyozaka! You fell asleep during class! DETENTION!!!

Isho: Aww man...

DURING RECESS...

Isho is sitting by himself under a tree hitting himself on the head for being so stupid as to getting detention on the first day at school when his friend Darren comes running up to him.

Darren: Hey Isho! Wanna net-battle?

Isho: Sure! But go easy on me. Falcman and I haven't been battling lately.

Darren: All right! Let's go! Ironman!

Isho: Falcman!

Isho and Darren: Battle Routine, Set!

Ironman and Falcman: Execute!

Falcman and Ironman are in a blue-ish green arena decorated with green lines and strange blue boxes. The sky is colored with many red auroras and shooting stars. The two navis find themselves standing face to face, staring eye-to-eye...

Falcman: You're not gonna get me this time Ironman!

Ironman: We'll just have to see how this plays out!

Falcman readies his sword, takes flight, and charges at Ironman.

Darren: Ironman, get ready! Battle-chip: Counter, GO!!!

Falcman swipes his cyber-sword at Ironman only to be blown backwards with an immense amount of force.

Isho: Woah! Hang in there Falcman!

Falcman struggles to stand from the amazing blow.

Falcman: Ohh... that hurt...

Isho: Let's get em' back with one of our own battle chips! Battle chip: Long Sword, GO!!!

Falcman raises his arms and an immensely long sword appears. He flies into the air and swings at Ironman.

Ironman: Yikes!

Boom! The sword hit Ironman directly on the head. He is temporarily incapable of fighting back.

Isho: Now's our chance Falcman! Battle-chip: Time-bomb, GO!!!

A small bomb appears in Falcman's hands. He throws the bomb as he swoops down in front of Ironman.

Falcman: O.K. Isho! The bomb is set!

Isho: Then what are you doing? Get out of there!

3...

Darren: Ironman! snap out of it!

2...

Ironman: Huh?

Ironman starts to come to his senses...

Ironman: What the...? WHAT'S THAT!?!?!?

1...

Boom! Ironman tries to escape but is too late and gets caught the massive explosion.

Darren: Ironman! Jack out!

Ironman: On my way!

Ironman retreats back to his PET to rest.

Darren: Great battle Isho! you've gotten better since the last time I battled you!

Isho: Hey, thanks... Falcman and I have been training hard since you last beat us.

Darren: All that work paid off! You should enter into the city tournament this weekend!

Ring! Ring!

Darren: I'll have to give you the details later! Let's get back to class before we get into trouble!

Isho and Darren run inside the school, but little did they know...

...They might not be coming back out...Mwahahahahahaha!!!

READ CHAPTER 2 TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!

UNTIL NEXT TIME, GOODBYE!!!!