Hi, this is my first FanFic, I have published it before but I took it off, but it's back again! Please comment on what you think

or any improvements. Disclaimer: I don't own Warriors

Allegiances

Thunder Clan

Leader: (Thick furred black she cat speckled with white giving sparkly appearance, emerald green eyes)

Deputy: Maplecloud (reddish brown she cat, pale blue eyes)

Medicine cat: Mistcloud (cloudy grey she cat, pale blue eyes)

Apprentice-Rowanleaf

Warriors

Spottedfeather (tortoiseshell she cat, blue eyes)

Gorsetail (dark brown tabby tom with large amber eyes)

Shellwhisker (cloudy pale brown tom, amber eyes)

Ashfeather (sooty grey she cat with thick, feathered fur, green eyes)

Duskpelt (cloudy grey tom with dusky amber pink eyes like sunset)

Ravenfeather (thick furred black tom with white paws, green eyes)

Stormpelt (blue grey tom, yellow eyes)

Icewing (silvery white she cat, green eyes)

Smoketail (brown tabby she cat with a greyish stripy tail, green eyes)

Bronzeclaw (russet tom with unusual bronze coloured claws)

Apprentice- Thunderpaw

Flametail (fiery orange striped tabby she cat with emerald green eyes)

Russetail (golden brown tom with a large, plumy tail

Blackfang (fearsome black tom with long, sharp teeth)

Skywhisker (silver tabby tom, vibrant blue eyes)

Willowheart (slim white and tortoiseshell she cat, deep blue eyes)

Poppyflower (brown and white tabby she cat, amber eyes)

Starspirit (black and white she cat, yellow eyes)

Froststorm (thick set white tom with green eyes)

Thistlefur (tufty furred tabby tom, amber eyes)

Emberstripe (yellow gold tabby tom, green eyes)

Apprentice- Sagepaw

Apprentices

Thunderpaw (brown mottled tom with a white streak down one flank)

Sagepaw (fluffy grey tom, green eyes)

Rowanleaf (brown tabby tom, emerald eyes, apprentice to medicine cat)

Queens

Nightshine, (black long furred she cat, amber eyes), mother of Stormpelt's kits: Yewkit (brown tom) and Oakit (reddish brown tabby tom)

Mallowleaf (creamy white she cat, green eyes), mother of Duskpelts kits: Mosskit (tortoiseshell she cat), Rosekit (fluffy cream she cat), Ivykit (mottled silver and black she cat) and Applekit (black tom)

Skycloud (pure white she cat, pale yellow gold eyes), mother of Skywhisker's kits: Silverkit (silver striped tabby tom, huge golden eyes) and Frostpaw (pure white she cat with amber eyes)

Elders

Sparklepelt (faded ginger and white she cat, brown eyes)

Snubnose (big brown tom with a short, flat muzzle, amber eyes)

Prologue

"Shimmerfur, are you ready to receive your final life?" asked the young she cats mother, whose fur was glittering with the stars in her pelt.

"Yes, I'm ready", she replied, swallowing away a whine of terror. Shimmerfur stepped towards her mother, matching her black pelt speckled with white, which sparkled in sun and moonshine, almost exactly. Her emerald green eyes closed shut as Shimmerfur pressed her elegant, long muzzle to her mothers and prepared herself. I'm going to be okay, she thought. I'm going to be okay.

"Shimmerfur, I give you a life of faith, for knowing that even when you don't know what lies ahead, you will always believe in yourself and your choices." A golden feeling of determination, hope and belief spread through Shimmerfur's body, filling up every inch of her until she felt she either had to yowl or collapse. Would she ever have this much faith in herself? Just as she thought she could no longer bear it, the glow drained out of her paws and left Shimmerfur tingling with renewed energy.

"Shimmerfur, your old live is no more." The voice of every cat she had ever known blended together into one clear mew.

"We hail you as Shimmerstar, leader of Thunder Clan!"

As yowls and calls of Shimmerstar's new name vibrated through her body, the voices got quitter and the starry clearing gradually faded away, and Shimmerstar looked around wildly. Where was everyone? She started trembling with fear, then fur brushed against her flank and her mother's familiar scent filled her nose.

"One time, far from now, there will be an apprentice in your Clan who will change Thunder Clan forever. Be well, little one, and remember my words for seasons to come."

"Wait! Tell me more! I don't understand!" Shimmerstar wailed as her mother's scent faded away.

"I don't know what to do!"