Hi, I am still new at this but here we go again. Please tell me if there is something I need/should change or add and if there is any spelling or grammar mistakes please tell me about those too, I just want to be a better writer but I need a little help.
DISCLAIMER: I do not own anything and I am just borrowing the characters and I will definitely give them back to the awesome J.K. Rowling.
prologue:
(I am pretending that Professor Umbridge was Percy Weasley's 3rd year DADA teacher.)
Percy was dreading his third year. Bill was in his seventh year and he was also head boy. Then there was Charlie, who was one of the star quidditch players and in his sixth year. And it's impossible to forget the twins. This was their first year and he sure it was going to be filled with pranks and mischief in general. Percy knew he was going to be out looked again. I mean it's pretty hard to look past the genus, major pranksters and star athlete. So here he was left in the dust again. at home he was just the boring goody-goody that only cared about grades, and now he was going to be completely forgotten at school even more. Also the new DADA teacher was from the ministry and she was heard to be extremely mean and unfair. All in all tomorrow was going to be the start of a very long year.
Chapter 1:
"Everybody GET DOWN HERE NOW!" Percy heard his mother scream at about 7:30 in the morning. He had to cover his ears, because he was quite close being downstairs at the kitchen table reading a book. If the other Weasleys didn't get down stairs fast they were going to be in trouble. All of a sudden he felt the floor vibrate a little and looked up and saw six redheads thundering down the stairs. After a series of "Good Mornings", They all ran to the table and piled food onto their plate. "Percy being a goody-goody and" Fred started, "Getting up early to read and study.' George finished. then Ron muttered "Who would have thought." When all the food was gone Percy, because he was already packed and had his luggage by the fireplace, was told to clean up the table and do the dishes. Percy walked over to the sink, grabbed a dish and started scrubbing. Mrs. Weasley started yelling out more tasks in attempt to get to the train station on time if not a little early. Mrs. Weasley always hoped to achieve this but so far it had never happened. Eventually the bags and trunks started to pile up by the fireplace and Bill, Charlie and the twins were almost finished packing. But then Percy heard a scream and because everyone was busy doing something Percy finished the last dish and ran up stairs to see what had happened. when he got upstairs he saw a crying Ron trying to get away from something moving across the floor. "Ron what happened?" Percy asked while grabbing a handful of tissues and handing them to Ron "The twins brought a spider and forced me to touch it until it bit me." Ron then said pointing a finger at the twins across the room. Percy first looked at the spider bite to make sure that the bite wasn't poisonous, it wasn't, then he walked over to the twins and went in to lecturing mode. "What on Earth were you thinking? Number one, Ron is Terrified of spiders you two know that. And second to force him to touch it against his will is very mean. Then third to make him touch it until it BITES HIM IS UNTHINKABLE! it could have been poisonous then what would you have done?" Percy finished. "We're sorry" Fred said. "We didn't think about what could happen." George said as well. "We just wanted to give Ronniekins something to remember us by." Fred said again. "Well don't you dare do it ever again. And Mum WILL hear about this. Understand? Percy said, then told Ron to clean his hand and then walked out of thee room to help pack somewhere else. When everyone was packed they all flooed to Diagon Alley and ran to the train station. Then they all ran through the wall everyone all said goodbye to Bill, Charlie, Fred and George. Nobody had noticed that Percy had snuck off onto the train to find Oliver Wood and Kayla Rosier.