Chapter 1: Pain

So hi everybody! I'm so sorry I deleted "A Demigod Story." This is an improvised version of that story. Have fun reading it.

I also replace the first chapter and there was a review for it:

Redarrowissupercool:" is this related to frozen ? anywho make more ppx"

Um, no this is not related to frozen, this is about The hero's of Olympus. And what does ppx stand for? Anyway, thanks Redarrowissupercool for the review.

Time for story!

She woke up in that horrible room that held so many painful memories. NO! She thrashed around. No use, she was chained, like always, he would never trust me to be unchained.

"Hello again." I flinched as I heard the hissing voice. I looked up and saw his face was hidden by his robe.

"No need to thrash, your chained and will not be released until. . . You know already, I think. You have failed me. I believed that you would have succeeded. I guess that's what I get for trusting a amuture, stupid kid." As he walked closer, he cupped her chin in his hand, almost a loving gesture.

"Please-" My voice cracked like I haven't used it in a million years.

"Give me a second chance, I won't fail you again. Please, please. . ." She whimpered.

"Why should I? You failed me once, why should I trust you again? Give me a good reason." He asked.

"Because. . . You know I would do anything to make sure she's safe, anything. I will not fail you." She said.

"Good reason. But you know everything comes with a cost." He taunted.

Her eye's widened and her mind flashed to the last time she had made him mad. Pain seared through her like she was experiencing it all over again.

(Flashback)

She was in the exact room.

"Where is that stupid camp you were going to? Where is it! Tell me where is it!" he shouted.

"If it's so stupid, then why do you want to know where it is?" She asked to evade his question.

" Oh, now you're trying to play smart are you?" He smiled before he started to continue,

" I know what will make you change your mind about telling me. I have never done this to you, but I will tell you it hurts. "he laughed evilly, the shackles on her wrists hand and ankles started to warm up and she knew what was going to happen, how could she be so stupid? He knew her weakness. He knew how he could get information out of her. NO! This time she would not give in. . . even if it killed her. Soon the heat warmed up, a lot. She knew it would be seconds from it being unbearable. And it did become unbearable, she screamed, then fainted. When she woke up, there was burned marks on her skin and she could not make it vanish and cool off.

(End of flashback)

She bit her lip and nodded. Soon the pain came again, she screamed and heard a laugh and something that sounded like "silly girl", which was the last thing she heard.

*Dunh Dunh DUNH!* Ahhhh, a cliff hanger. And the first 3 people who review, will be in my story(Redarrowissupercool you will be in the story, and s/he will not count as the first 3 people). If you don't want to be in it, just tell me. For the first three people, give me this information:

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If you don't tell me this information or tell me you don't want to be in it,, I will make it up.

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Keep calm and love lightning

Until next time,

-Gyan