OK IT'S THE REVISION!! OMG!! I GOT IT IN TODAY!! WHOA!! Ok ok but for real it's getting a major improvement so claps for me cleaning my room and the people who gave me MORE ideas claps
Ok here we go.
I don't own Inuyasha
It was Kagome's 14th birthday. All her friend came circled around her smiling and chatting. Kagome didn't have the gorgeous looks some of her friends had but her personality made up for that. She was friendly, kind, and quick to accept others in the growing friend circle.
Kagome politely excused herself from her friends and beckoned all the girls to come with her so that they could change into their swimsuits.
Before Kagome headed for the stairs, she quickly looked around the room. Her best friend and crush still wasn't there yet.
Sango lightly pulled the girls arm.
"Don't worry Kaggy-chan. Sesshomaru will be here. You know how his dad is with remembering times and stuff. They'll probably be here in five minutes."
Kagome smiled.
"Yeah your right."
They continued up the stairs to Kagome's medium sized bedroom.
All the girls giggled and changed into their swimsuits.
It was a lot of pushing and falling down but they managed.
Soon all in the room was Kagura, Sango, and Kagome.
"Kagura I can't believe your going with someone in highschool," Kagome squealed.
Kagura and Kagome were practically opposites but that's what made them become best friends. They leveled each other off.
Kagura hugged kagome.
"I know I couldn't wait to tell you! You know I always tell my bestie everything first."
Sango stepped back. This happened all the time. Sometimes she felt jealous. She and Kagome talked all the time but she knew that Kagura balanced Kagome in a way she never would be able to.
Sango stood up from the bed.
"Let's go downstairs. Everyone is waiting for the b-day princess."
All three girls laughed.
They headed down stairs with Sango in the front and Kagome in the back.
As Kagome got to the top stair and started to walk down she saw Sesshomaru walk in the door with his brother.
He looked up and smiled at her. Kagome hurried down the stair passed her friends to Sesshomaru's arms.
"Gods, could you be any later?"
Sesshomaru laughed.
"I came didn't I. Oh and I'm staying the night with Inu."
"You owe me then 'cause I win."
This always happened. Usually when Kagome invited Sesshomaru over during a weekend and occasionally during the weekday, he would sleep over. Last night he tried to insist that he was going home after the party.
Kagome led Sesshomaru and Inuyasha upstairs to the guest room. Sesshomaru smiled. He was glad to see that today she was smiling. Not to long ago she had lost her dad.
Kagome pulled the towels out from the closet. She noticed Sesshomaru was smiling at her as she put the towels on the bed.
"What?"
Sesshomaru handed over his present.
"I hope you like it."
Kagome giggled as she opened the gift. Inside was a necklace with a small icy blue stone at the end of the chain. Kagome was speechless.
"It's..it's beautiful. Thank you."
Inuyasha rolled his eyes.
As he walked out the door he mumbled," Why don't you guys date already."
This was a frequently asked questioned. In fact, they even thought about it plenty of times. But they decided to wait.
Sesshomaru grabbed her hand.
"Let's head down stairs I want cake."
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