Alice in wonderland
It was just another normal day like any other for alice, boring. Alice was a normal girl average build, long black hair to her waist with she wore a red ribbon in. She wore a black, white and red dress with was simply designed wiht bows. She was meant to be learning but she wasn't paying any attention. Instead she was off in her own world daydreaming, wondering if anything would ever be any different around here. Suddenly she found herself very tired and thought to herself that she would only close her eyes for a second.
*ALICES POV
Opening my eyes i found myself to be in a strange new place. There was black and white spirals everywhere she looked and the sky was a nightmarish shade of red and the ground was made of black and white blocks some sat suspended in mid air, a forest surrounded this weird scene and it was very dark and it seemed to creep down like it would take me under.
I closed my eyes hoping if i do i'll wake up and all this will just be a dream, but i heard a rushling for the forest. It's proably just the wind i tell myself and go to see whats there. Slowly i approach where the sound is coming from my heart beats quickens, i tell myself this is just a dream nothing can hurt you in a dream... right?
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so what do you think?