Disclaimer: 3 doesn't own Elsword!
Title: Initiate Screaming
Summary: Reactions to "Matchmaker Elgang! ElsAi" with a remake down below. Attempt of a remake, at least.
3: Ahehehe owo #slapped XwX
OCs: 3… e.e
3: OvO W-Well, this story will be about me commenting on the stuff my past self has written (thus the title initiate screaming cuz ugh). 3 saw someone doing this on ff net too before, and it seemed interesting, so…
I shall try *w*
*cracks knuckles* Alrighty… Time to get ready for the cringe owo'
Now without further ado… "Matchmaker Elgang! ElsAi" ouo'
ARGH just the very title makes me cry QWQ
Classes:
Elsword- Rune Slayer
Aisha- Elemental Master
Rena- Wind Sneaker
Raven- Blade Master
Eve- Code Empress
Chung- Iron Paladin
BOLD= 3's comments
BOLD ITALIC= Other stuff
REGULAR The story
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Rena's POV
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARGH! ELSWORD AND AISHA SHOULD CONFESS ALREADY!
CHILL RENA, CHILL! OVO
Ehem... Excuse me for my outburst. I'm just really frustrated!
They both have been blushing around each other, obviously they liked each other, BUT THEY WON'T CONFESS!
I'm currently in the living room with the Elgang except Els and Aisha. "Guys! We should make Elsword and Aisha confess!" I exclaimed.
Ugghhh. Them repeating words and cringey ugh QwQ And let them confess in peace! (?)
"I'm busy." Eve... Eve... Busy as always... -.-
"My Destroyer is a bit broken... Miss Eve! Can you fix it?" "Of course." So I guess Chung can't do it too. He never goes anywhere without that Destroyer of his. I wonder why...
This spacing… *sobs*
"Where's Raven?" "Sleeping" answered Eve while fixing Chung's Destroyer. I facepalmed. Why does he have to always wake up at 9 in the morning..? It's still 8 PM...
I guess I'll have to do it by my own...
I quickly sneaked out from the living room and saw Aisha running over with a letter. "Rena!" "Ng? What is it, Aisha?" I asked. "Look!"
She shoved the letter in front of my face. I grabbed it and read it.
(Letter)
Dear Elsword,
Please meet me at the park at 8 PM.
From,
Your Secret Admirer
CLICHÉ OWO
AND WHY IS THAT LETTER STILL THERE?! LOGICALLY SPEAKING, ELS WOULD HAVE BROUGHT IT WITH HIM! *pulls hair*
"He went to the park did he?" Aisha nodded. "Who's this from?" "I dunno. It just said from his Secret Admirer." Aisha answered.
NOW ISN'T THAT OBVIOUS OWO *headwalls* AND THE GRAMMAR! THE FLIPPING GRAMMAR!
"Then let's go there!" "W-What?! R-Rena-"
Before Aisha continued her talking, I pulled her outside and ran to the park while dragging her.
"R-Re-Ren-Reeeeenaaaaaaaaaaaa! Slow dooooooooown!" Aisha exclaimed.
I stopped right after I arrived at the park and quickly jumped on top of a tree. "YOU ALMOST-" "Sssssshhhhh..."
I closed her mouth with my hand. Fiuh~ She almost blew our cover!
FIUH?!
I spotted a girl who looked similar to Aisha, but is not. (VP)
Wait... Isn't she from Knight's gang?
Seriously, me?! Seriously?! *banshee screeching(What)*
Describe VP's appearance or something at least! TVT And this ridiculous rushed plot TwT
"U-Um... A-Actually... I-I l-like you, E-Elsword..." Aisha froze in place while I assured her that everything's going to be alright. Seriously, I wondered how dense Aisha can be?
"I'm sorry, Void. But I like someone else." The 2 Aishas froze in place. "O-Oh..." The other Aisha, Void is it? Sadly said.
*insert Scream painting expression*
"But I know someone who likes you in your gang, though." This certainly rose Void's interest. "Who?" Elsword grinned. "Let's just say... the person who has been following you and is now hiding in the bushes."
WHAT NOW, VOID?! YOU'RE THAT QUICK TO MOVE ON?! *facetables(?)*
Upon being found out, someone appeared from the bushes with a red face. Void's face became red too. "K-Knight? W-What are you doing here?" "U-Um... S-Since you just left without saying a word to any of us, I got worried and decided to follow you..."
I quickly jumped down, kidnapped Elsword, and placed him beside Aisha. "Rena?! Aisha?! What're you guys doing here?!"
Aisha whacked his head with her staff. "Says the one who left without telling!" She said. "Now... Now... Let's leave those 2 lovebirds alone!" I smiled and pointed at Void and Knight who are kissing each other.
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww~ Elsword and Aisha had a red face before nodding to me, meaning that they want to leave.
I CAN'T EVEN. THIS CRINGE. SAVE ME SOULLL QWQ HOW CAN I WRITE THIS?! HOWWWW?!
CAN I BURN THIS FILE ALIIIIIVE?!
OCs: NO, 3! CALM DOWN!
We went back to our house and earned an "Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww~~~~" Of course we're confused, until Chung showed Elsword's diary.
Elsword's face became as red as his hair.
CHILL WITH THE 'AWW'S! OWO *FLIPS TABLES*
(diary)
Date: 30/10/13 (or whatever year it is is Elrios)
Dear Diary,
Today's Halloween. I was thinking of dressing up as a vampire. Aisha said she's going to dress up as a witch. Rena's still choosing, but she's thinking of
going as a zombie. Raven's going to be a wolf. Eve is going to be a mummy and Chung was thinking of being frankenstein. LOL That'll be an epic fail!
So, we're at Ariel's Halloween party. I saw everyone in their costumes. I honestly think that Aisha looks... cute... in that witch costume.
BTW, remind me to kill Apple after this. She put a mistletoe on top of me and Aisha. Good thing it isn't Christmas, or else... I don't even want to talk about
it...
When Proto reminded Apple that the mistletoe rule only applies in Christmas, she decided to do another thing, which is to push me on top of Aisha...
I'm going to kill her later... We can't talk to each other for a day because of that.
That's all for today.
*INITIATE SCREAMING*
Elsword and Aisha's face became veeeeeery red. Elsword took his sword, "Why... Did... You... Guys... STEAL MY DIARY?!"
"NOW!" Eve shouted. Raven and Chung suddenly ran to Elsword and Aisha.
"W-What're you guys doing?" Aisha panicked. Raven is now behind Elsword while Chung is behind Aisha. They grinned before pushing them...
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DUAK!
Duak?! *slams head on wall*
Elsword and Aisha screamed in anger and embarassment, "THAT'S FOR MAKING US KISS!"
Raven had a bump on his head while Chung had swirls in his eyes and an extra bump on his head too. "I see stars..." he said.
This extremely rushed and nonsensical plot is beyond me…. QWQ
AND THAT WRONG SPELLING TAT MY SPELLING NAZI IS CALLING OUT TO ME!
"embarassment" should be "embarrassment"! QwQ
Aisha's POV
W-Why did they d-do that?! I-It's too embarassing..! I quickly ran to my room and locked the door. "AISHA!" I heard E-Elsword shout. I won't be able to even look at his face now!
Chung's POV
O.O
An emoji here?! OwO
Uh, oh. Big sis Aisha seems too embarrassed... "Elsword, you go and bring her here." Miss Eve said. "Why me?!" "Cause you like her, am I right?" Elsword's face looks really red right now... He must be too embarassed too.
"Go before I slap you." Miss Eve threatened. "Ugh... Fine..." Then he left to Big sis Aisha's room.
I put an ice on my head to heal the bump. Raven is doing it too. "Do you think it'll be just fine, Miss Eve? They're pretty embarassed right now." I stated.
"They'll be just fine, Chung." I nodded. Okay... It'll be just fine, Chung... "Why didn't you guys tell me about this?! I want to help too!" "If we told you the plan, you won't try to make Aisha leave won't you? We have to steal Elsword's diary."
"I would!" "But it'll be too suspiscious." I said.
MORE WRONG SPELLINGS QWQ
IT SHOULD BE "SUSPICIOUS" QWQ
AND LE SPACING IS SO LACKING IN MANY WAYS POSSIBLE! QWQ
…. Many Weiss(?) possible owo #slapped XwX (TOSOTC reference XD)
"Anyways, let's just wait for the results." Raven said.
We all waited...
Elsword's POV
KNOCK KNOCK
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No response.
"Aisha? Open this door already!"
Again, no response.
You leave me no choice...
"OPEN UP! OR ELSE I'LL BARGE IN OR BURN THE DOOR DOWN!"
BURN IT! BURN IT DOWN NOWWWW! OVO #slapped XwX
The door is now surrounded by blue aura and opened by itself. I went in and saw Aisha burrying herself with a pillow.
*sulks* Why… TwT
It should be "burying" TwT
"Come out from there, Aisha." "Leave."
I sighed. "Aisha, I'll count to 10. If you don't get up I'll pull you. 1... 2... 3... 4... 5... 6... 7... 8... 9... 10...
...
"I'm serious." "Then why didn't you?" "I don't know." Aisha facepalmed. I just chuckled.
That would have been an awesome humor scene, but my past self didn't put it to good use QwQ
"Leave me alone, Els." "No, I won't." She shot me a look of 'Leave-me-or-die'.
This is going to take forever! I decided to pull her hand. "H-Hey! Let go of me!" Aisha is now off the bed. "The other's are waiting. Let's go." "No, I won't." "Why?"
She became red and looked at the floor. I smiled, "You know, Aisha. I liked you ever since we met." Aisha widened her eyes. "You don't believe me?" "N-no, not really-"
...
She froze a few seconds before closing her eyes. We stayed like that for around 15 seconds before I pulled away. Aisha's face looked very red, and I'm sure that I'm the
same too. "L-Let's go back." I stuttered. Aisha, not able to say anything, just smiled and nodded.
*endless twitching and wincing*
This failed fluff QwQ
Chung's POV
THEY'RE BAAAAAAAAAAAAAACK! XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
"Good. I suppose that you 2 are now dating each other?" They just smiled.
"GROUP HUUUUUG!" I exclaimed before hugging Miss Eve, Raven, Rena, Elsword, and Big Sis Aisha. We all laughed together.
After the group hug, Miss Eve said, "So, the matchmaking's over, right?"
Elsword and Aisha smiled at each other before saying, "Not yet..."
3: NO! SPARE ME FROM THIS TORTURE QWQ I CAN'T TAKE IT! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH *HEAD WALLS*
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Ozul: *winces* Well… That's that, I guess. Do you still dare continue this?
3: *twitches* As cringe-worthy as this is… the fict must go on. TwT
Ozul: This is not even a legit fict =w=
3: Shush! OvO
Now that the cringe's out of the way… 3 is in disbelief that such cringe is real and will now attempt to redeem myself! OwO
Thus, I shall now write what this story "Matchmaker Elgang! ElsAi" would be like had I written it with my current brain! *fixes glasses* *w*
If Rinkushido is still here, I hope I did myself justice ;w;
Without further ado, I shall present to you the new and improved version! OvO
Classes are still the same, cuz this is meant to be a rewrite. owob
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"To cast the spell 'Lightning Shower', one must channel their mana into the staff whilst imagining a shockwave that strikes through their opponents…" Aisha mumbled as her finger traced through each words within the spell book. "Imagine the shockwaves as spears…"
Her concentration was immediately broken by the increasingly loud chatter. She tightened her lips and sighed. That was the fourth time she tried to understand the same statement.
She looked around. The library was completely crowded with people, different from a while ago. She wasn't even able to learn more than three spells before the noise started to interrupt her.
She could just borrow them and read them at the mansion, but it's just as noisy. Maybe if she went to the training ground…
Aisha rose up with the pile of books in her hands.
Yes, that would probably be the best.
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The mansion was eerily silent.
Aisha went into a few rooms only to find them completely empty. It made her feel uncomfortable. How come the library became so noisy and the mansion quiet?
Everyone's probably just away. She tried to keep a positive mind and went into the living room to read. However, the silence did little to ease her mind from the foreboding inside her. Something wasn't right.
She forced the thoughts away from her mind and returned to the book. Her friends are strong. If they really are in trouble somewhere, they'd be able to contact her.
As she flipped over to the next page, the sound of the door click open turned her focus to it.
Footsteps were fairly audible outside the door. Someone seemed to be going up and down the mansion, similar to what she did to check for her friends' presence, and soon they came to where she is.
She stared at the door right before it was opened. It was most likely…
"Hey, where's everyone?"
Chung. [1]
"No idea. I just got back." Aisha replied and frowned, "You don't know either?"
"Eh?" the cream-haired boy widened his eyes, "Really? Man, what're those guys doing?"
He sounded more frantic than anything else. His expression was that of anxiety, something that worried her.
"What is it? Did something bad happen?" she asked.
"Oh! No, no. There's nothing wrong." He awkwardly smiled. "Just… Uh… Stay here for a moment!"
He rushed off, not even bothering to close the door.
Aisha raised an eyebrow to herself. What's going on? What were the others doing?
"Hey, Chung! What's the hu- Hey-!"
There was the sound of the door closing, then a string of incomprehensible complaints. The footsteps this time were much quieter, probably because Chung wore armor, and sounded like it immediately went for the living room.
A familiar red-head peeked through the open door and spotted her.
"Hey, Aisha!" Elsword grinned, stepping into the room. "You're the only one here?"
"Seems so. You didn't meet any of them on the way back?" she replied.
Elsword hopped onto the single couch near the one she was sitting.
"No," he answered and took a book from the pile she brought back. Aisha glared at him, but made no comment on it. "Rena said that Amelia was calling for her. Raven went to visit Velder, and Eve went to do some errands."
He paused in the middle of opening a chapter about runes.
"I dunno 'bout Chung. He said he was going with Eve to fix his Destroyer, but since he just left again…" he trailed off.
Aisha nodded slowly.
"And you?"
Elsword smirked.
"Interested?" he said using a teasing tone. Aisha's cheeks flared into a scorching red in a mix of embarrassment and annoyance. It took all her might to not start using Meteor Shower and burn him alive on the spot.
"Don't be cocky, jerk! I merely asked!" she snapped, "If you don't want to, then fine! It's not important anyways!"
The Rune Slayer cackled aloud in hearing her reaction, but he quickly toned it down into a chuckle the moment he saw the furious look in her eyes. She was gripping her summoned staff tightly, and he could just see the lightning crackling around it.
"Chill! I was only joking!" he closed his mouth to hide his laughter. "That aside, what spell are you learning?"
Aisha huffed and crossed her arms. He was definitely changing the topic, but she would also be childish if she continued on.
"Elemental Storm." She replied.
"Elemental Storm, eh? That's gonna be difficult indeed…" The red-head hummed. "…but nothing too hard."
"Yes, so I'm not going to need your help this time." She declared, reading his intentions, and started to leave for the training grounds.
Elsword paused. She caught on, but it was probably not that difficult. They've assisted each other in learning spells before since they were the only ones with similar abilities in the group.
He shrugged and followed after her.
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Once they reached their destination, Aisha finally let out a frustrated sigh she's been holding in and promptly turned around. She crossed her arms in front of him and tapped her foot to the ground
"Why did you follow me?" she demanded.
"I'm watching you fail." He playfully said and made his way towards the sidelines to sit down.
"F-Fail?!" her eyes widened and she fumed. "W-Why you-!"
"Rather than trying to kill me," he sat, smirking, "you should focus on actually proving me wrong, shouldn't you?"
She puffed out her cheeks in annoyance. He was right, even though she didn't want to admit it.
After taking in a few calming breaths, she summoned both her staff and the spell book with a wave of her hand and opened to the page where the spell was written in.
"Let's see here… Elemental Storm is a series of three different kinds of high-level elemental spells done using quick precision. The first one is spikes of ice, followed by Lightning Shower, and finished with Gust Screw followed by Gust Storm…" she tightened her lips, "… and all three spells have to be amplified from normal…"
"You can always use an El's Essence for that." Elsword helpfully piped in.
"I know," the purplette sighed, "but that thing's difficult to get."
The Rune Slayer hummed to himself, rummaging through his pockets before he tossed something at her.
"Here, catch!"
In reflex, knowing that she wouldn't be able to catch it with her bare hands, Aisha used magic to keep whatever the thing was mid-air. She took it, widening her eyes at the essence in her hand.
"Why do you have this?" she asked, snapping her gaze to his direction. The boy grinned.
"Leftovers from my own training."
Aisha raised her eyebrow.
"Didn't you finish that three days ago?" she questioned.
"I forgot."
Knowing that the boy's only going to give her more questions than answers the more she asked, she decided to let it pass and went to look at her book one more time.
"Ice, lightning, then fire… Got it." she muttered, then snapped the book shut. "Make a shield if you want. This might get out of hand."
"Nah, don't worry about it." he waved it off.
She wondered if it was because he had faith in her or because he was underestimating the spell's destructive capabilities. They can usually control what the spell can affect and what it can't, but considering how dangerous it was, she didn't know if she could do it.
If she's able to control what her spell targets whilst casting it, then it was considered a success.
She mentally shook off the heat she felt in her cheeks and gripped her staff tightly, the book disappearing.
"I warned you." she said, the El's Essence glowing as it floated in front of her.
Focusing her mana on channeling the elements, she took a deep breath before casting the three spells in quick succession, the essence amplifying each of them.
Elsword watched silently, impressed that she was able to cast three large spells in a row with ease. He knew fully well from his experience that making a single mistake can be lethal towards the caster, and he had only attempted two of them.
Once the huge twister of fire finally dissipated into sparks, the red-head applauded.
"See? You could do it after all!" he grinned, gesturing that he was not damaged in any way, nor was his hair singed when the fire reached him.
"That was still dangerous, you idiot!" Aisha snapped, "What if things went wrong, huh?! You'd be roast in an instant in that-!"
"Heh, I'm not worried." he calmly replied, tilting his head as he smiled. "I knew you'd pull it off."
The Elemental Master's face started to scorch in disbelief. Her grip on the staff tightened once again, hoping that it'd get rid of her blush.
A faint squeal resounded from their right, causing the pair to immediately turn their gaze towards it.
A very suspicious looking bush's leaves were rustling, something impossible since there was no wind at the time.
Looking at each other, the magic users nodded and silently started to approach the plant, both using magic to keep the grass from reacting with their footsteps.
When Elsword finally stood a few meters in front of it, Aisha teleported to the other side.
Shocked gasps resounded from her side of the bush, causing familiar people to stand up and turn around, only to realize that they were surrounded.
"You guys…" Aisha smiled in an evil way, finally realizing what they were up to.
Rena awkwardly laughed, scratching her cheek.
"Um… We… just wanted you two to bond?" she tried.
Aisha replied by crackling electricity through her staff.
Seeing the group's horrified expressions, except for Eve who remained straight-faced whilst Chung latched onto her, Elsword stifled his laughter.
"O-Okay," he stuttered in mirth, still covering his mouth as he made his way towards Aisha and circled an arm around her shoulder. "I appreciate the thought, guys, but that's kind of unnecessary."
"Yeah," the magician nodded, doing her best to ignore his arm, "We don't need any bonding time and-"
"I'm courting her alone just fine."
Aisha nearly choked on air and Rena squealed in delight. The other Elgang members, except Eve who remained unimpressed, had their mouths gaping wide.
"You admitted it." Raven nodded slowly in approval, his arms crossed. "That's good, Elsword. You're growing up."
Elsword grinned, side stepping just in time to evade a staff swung at him.
"That's not funny, Els-!" Aisha scorched red, her knuckles white from gripping her weapon.
The Rune Slayer smirked at her, one of his feet taking a step back as if for precaution.
"You were embarrassed?" he teased and immediately dashed off.
"GET BACK HERE!"
The rest of the Elgang looked on at them and simultaneously sighed, except for Eve who was now poking at Chung for him to let go. He did, blushing.
"I was so sure he'd finally confess…" Rena covered her face using her hands in anguish.
Another reason why they wished the two weren't that stubborn.
[1]- Bet you guys didn't expect that, huh? X3 #slapped XwX
Ozul: … This is not even a remake anymore…
3: The plot was too ugh to be saved TwT
I tried to give Els a more cheerful and carefree personality like what Elwiki said in his concept art. :D
Hopefully he was in character, and I shall write Rune Slayer Elsword that way in my future Elsword fanficts XD
Tell me if that kind of personality fits for Rune Slayer though owo Still, I won't make him a playboy type since I think he's more like a playful one instead.
Ozul: Just say that you can't even write those kind of types.
3: SSSH, OZZY! SSSHHH! OWO
Welp, I know I put this on complete, but feel free to request a chapter or one-shot in my list of stories to react to :D FEEL FREE TO BASH ME BY REMINDING ME OF MY OWN CRINGEY WRITING SKILLS :'D
I'm trying to get my spark of writing back with different ways, this is one of them owo
I'm getting too good at fluff due to my random OC drabbles… but I'm starting to lack in writing casual stuff TAT
Welp, you guys won't be seeing anything more than fluff from me in the romance department owo/
And no direct confessions, only implied ones, since I cringe in writing those now *awkward laughing*.
… My past self is traumatizing me.
Thanks for reading~