This is my first fanfiction. I know it still needs work. Review and tell me how the fist chapter went and give any advise. And if there is anyone willing to beta my story thats fine.
BPOV
"Hey Bella" called Charlie
" Ya"
"Alice is coming over in 5 minutes. She just called to tell you that it's really important." Grr. With Alice there is always something that is important other than her shopping which she loves.
"Okay"
I was in my room cleaning up a little bit and checking my emails. My cousin Emmett was coming in a few days to visit and maybe live in Forks. I'm so excited that he's coming but I also have to grocery
shopping because Emmett loves food a lot.
The door to my room flow out and Alice came walking in with a smile on her face.
"How's it going Bella baby"
"Alice what's so important that you have to tell me"
"My brother Edward is coming back from playing football." she said. Alice's brother Edward and best friend Jasper play pro football and are coming back for a two month break to family and for Alice Cullen to see her loving boyfriend of two-half years Jasper Hale.
"And your point is Ali, your boy friend is coming to see you and I have Mike the local druggy." She was giving me an all know smirk.
"Alice I know that smile and as much as I love you I'm going to end it soon with Mike. When he comes back from Seattle."
Alice and I hung out all day. Talked about boys, shopping, school, etc...
Tomorrow was Monday and cousin Emmett was coming and I couldn't wait to see him. I missed him so much.
Once Alice left I got ready for bed. In morning I got up took a shower got dress got all my school stuff ready, made breakfast for me and Charlie on left.
Once I arrived at school I ran into Angela, one of my good friends at school.
"Hey Bella, how's things hanging." she asked.
"You mean with Mike I don't know I want to end things with him but I have to wait until he comes back tomorrow, and plus Alice's brother is coming today so I'm going to her house after school for dinner"
"Wow. Bella, that is a lot. But I do hope everything is going to be okay with your break up with Mike. I really don't like him, even though you
went out with him for one year."
"Whatever, want to hang out at lunch."
"Sure" she said
Class were blah. Everyone was talking about Alice's brother coming back. I've seen Edward a couple times, but it was always "hi", bye thing and nothing else. Alice thinks I'm going to end up with her
brother that it's meant up be. :) Don't get me wrong here Edward is a really good looking guy but why would he go after someone like me...
Alice came and sat down at the table, telling me all the things she was going to do when Jasper come home today. It was nice to know that her boyfriend was coming back, but I couldn't wait to dump Mike. He was so bad for me I couldn't take it anymore.
The bell rang to head back to our classes. This was going to be an interesting rest of the day.
Once school was over, I was heading for my car when I heard someone call my name. I looked behind me and saw that it was Mike. He came up to me and gave me a kiss, but I stop him.
"Mike I really have to talk to you."
He looked at me, and I knew that face he was mad.
"Bella, can it wait I have some important things I need to deal with right now."
"NO! It can't wait, I can't see you anymore. I don't want to be your girlfriend; I want to break up with you."
He was so pissed. He took me to the forest and started to hit me. I was trying so hard to get him off of me but it didn't work. When he finished hitting me he told me that I was good for nothing and that I was a waste of time. I cried, cried and cried some more. When I finally got up everyone at school was gone so I got into my car and drove home. I was thankful that my dad wasn't home to see me like this.
Then I got a text.
Bella where are you? Edward and Jasper are here. I sent her a text
feeling bad about not telling her.
Sorry, can't make get caught up at home. Won't be able to come tonight.
Then my phone was ringing and it was Alice.
"Isabella Marie Swan! You are coming." I was going to tell her what happened to me.
"Alice I have to tell you something." and I told her what happened after school and what Mike did to me and leaving me in the forest. She was so shocked that it happened.
"Bella I'm so sorry that happened to you. I'll tell Jasper and Edward that I'm going to visit you for a bit"
"You, really don't have to, it's not that bad. Really! Jasper and Edward are back just spend the time with them and I'll see you at school tomorrow"
She really did want to take no as an answer, but she left it at that. I made dinner for Charlie and me and spent the rest of the night in my room crying.
I woke up the next day sore, sick, tired, just not the same as I would normally feel. I decide to stay home.
APOV
When Bella told me what Mike did to her after she broke up with him, made me want to kill him. He had the nerve to lay a finger on her. And now she wasn't going to come to over for dinner. Edward kept on asking were Bella was and asking if she was okay. I loved that he was thinking about her. But when she didn't show up to school I'm the morning like she promised I had to go see her. This was not like her at all.
So I left school at lunch to go see her. When she answered the door I was shocked at the way she looked. She had bruise on her arms, neck and a cut on her lip.
"Bella tell me that wasn't from Mike." I told her.
"They are from Mike and I would have never thought he would do that. I mean he has hit me once or twice, but never like that." I looked at her shocked. She was my best friend her ex-boyfriend has
hit her on different occasions and never told me. Yes I was mad, but she could have told me.
"Bella, if he has done this a couple of times why did you stay with him."
Bella was crying, and I felt sorry for her. She needed someone who loved her for her and care for her. Then I thought about something.
"Bella, Could you come over to my house for lunch Jasper really misses you and it would be so much fun."
She looked at me, thinking about what I asked her.
"Okay Alice I'll come just left me change and pit on long sleeves."
"Yay!"
She went upstairs to change. Ten minutes later we were off to my house. Once we got there we were greeted by Jasper and Edward shirtless wearing shorts. Bella was blushing when Jasper came up to her and gave her a hug.
"Bella! I haven't seen you in a really long time. How are things." said Jasper giving her a hug.
"I'm good. Pretty much the same, but a single woman." she was laughing nervously.
"That's good. So you're single now eh. Same with Edward here." got to love your Jasper.
"Hey Edward." said Bella.
EPOV
Bella looked amazing. Scratch that she looked so sexy. She had changed so much since the last time I saw her. Now that Jasper was trying to hock us up. I ignored his attempt at it.
I was thinking about all the things I want to do with Bella when I heard my name.
"Edward. Oh Edward. Earth to Edward."
"Ya, what is it?"
"I just asked how are you?" said Bella who was now blushed at me.
"Oh! I'm good. How have you been?" I said and I looked over at Alice and she had this twinkle in her eyes and I knew she was up to something.
"I've been okay, there have been better days." she looked at me when she said that.
"Jasper can I talk to you about something." said Bella
"Ya! Sure where do you want to talk." And with that they were off to talk and I was left with Alice. I left with her and went back inside the house.
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