This is just a sample of the multi chapter story that I am thinking of doing. The song that I have interjected into this story is If I had a Heart by Fever Ray. After watching that episode and hearing that song I felt this was the perfect song for this chapter. So please let me know what you think of this. Please review!


Get Elias

Prologue

This will never end
cause i want more
more, give me more, give me more

this will never end
cause i want more
more, give me more, give me more

Slowly circling the man tied to the chair it takes all of my carefully honed skills in control to keep from snapping his neck and killing him off quickly. But no, not after what he has done to Joss and to Taylor; no, his death would be slow, painful, and involve lots and lots of screaming.

After coming to stand in front of this vicious animal, I pour a bucket of ice cold water over his head, which causes the man to wake up screaming and yelling curses at me. The man is looking around trying to figure out where he is until his eyes land on me and he swallows in fear because he can see nothing but death in my eyes, my face, and hell I know even my aura is menacing.

He knows that his time has come to say hello to the reaper and my plan is to send him there on a one way ticket. His plan to get Carter ends up being his downfall. So it ends with me actually getting him... Elias!

if i had a heart i could love you
if i had a voice i would sing
after the night when i wake up
i'll see what tomorrow brings

if i had a voice i would sing

dangling feet from window frame

will i ever ever reach the floor?
more, give me more, give me more

And there Elias sits; waiting for death at the hands of the man who unknowingly saved his sorry ass only to have him turn around and try to kill Carter. Just thinking about how he scared her and Taylor; it takes everything in me once again to remember that I'm going to take my time with the bastard. I will savor every single moment because rest assured; it will the most painful moment up to the very last moment of his life.

Elias speaks; first begging then tries negotiating but it's all for nothing.

"Look John the boy wasn't supposed to be hurt, hell he wasn't even supposed to be home at the time I sent them to find the detective. You know I don't hurt kids because of what happened to me so please let us talk and work this out. Maybe I underestimated you…and obviously your feelings for Detective Carter. It was just business nothing personal." He sits there looking at me, expecting me so just say 'gee, okay let me untie you and let you be on your merry fucking way'. Not… going… to… happen!

"Nothing…personal?" I scream; rage, anger, and malice coursing through his veins. "Oh it's definitely very fucking personal when you try to take something that belongs to me. Do you know what you did to Taylor?" I take a deep breath and continue so softly and in such a calm manner that I know my rage has reached its peak, and killing Elias will be sweet justice and he can now see that he won't be walking out of here alive.

"I'll tell you what you did to him, first you made him, a mere boy, have to use what I taught him to defend not only himself but his mother and second you forced him to have to shoot and kill a man. You put in danger two of the most important people whom I will kill and die for because Detective Joss Carter and Taylor are mine! My family! My everything! And do you know what happens when you try and take everything from a man who, at one point, was in the gutter with nothing but a bottle of booze to give him comfort? Of course if she hears me saying this she'd kicked my ass because she's feisty like that." Chuckling I walk behind him to the table and pick up the instrument that will bring forth the first round of screams.

"Of course your men already know just how feisty she can be; if the ass kicking she gave those two assholes was any indication. She had some skills from her army days and of course I helped enhance them with my CIA training that I've cultivated over the years."

Turning he sees what I have picked up from the table and starts shaking his head no but it will do him no good.

"Do you want to know what you did wrong, besides fucking with Carter and her son that is? Biologists talk about how bears hibernate for the winter and if disturbed they come out of their dark holes growling, more vicious than what they were when they went in originally. It's the equivalent of poking the bear with a stick. That once these wild vicious animals are poked they wake up vicious and filled with rage at being disturbed.

By giving the order to have your men put their fucking hands on Joss and Taylor you essentially pokedthebear. And guess who the fucking bear is!" I scream this last part out like a madman but I just don't fucking care because my rage is so overwhelming.

Walking back in front of him I raise the sledgehammer and bring it down on his left knee crushing all the bones in that leg. His screams fill the warehouse but no one can hear and no one will come to his rescue.

crushed and filled with all i found underneath and inside
just to come around
more, give me more, give me more

if i had a voice i would sing


Hey guys I know it's been a while but I've been dealing with some health issues which has left me really tired. So sorry I haven't abandoned my other stories just put them off for a while. I started this story months ago so it does not follow along with the show but please give it a chance. Please review!