Hello all. This is Sage. Yes, I'm new here and just trying out some of my writing skills for the first time. I'm sorry if I'm very slow on updating, or if you dislike my writing, I'm always trying to improve ; Anyway, enough of that. This is my first fan fiction written here, so if you look back a couple months later and see some better fiction sitting somewhere, you know why. Anyway. Onwards with /b ' i Harvest Moon
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto no do I plain to sell/give this out for money.
Sage
"Byakugan!" Hinata Hyuga dropped down into her family's famous stance, her heart racing in her breast like a frightened bird. Her father crouched down into the similar stance opposite of the battle field from her. His pale white eyes critically watched his daughters every moment, and there was silence before he began to charge at the girl. Hinata watched her father's line of attack, flustered for a second. Sweat appeared on her brow, and she turned opposite of the way her father was strike and brought her body around in a wide turned circle. A look of pure determination crossed her face as she thrust a chakra filled palm towards the Hyuga leader. Hiashi's eyes squinted and he jumped suddenly, the palm not even touching his skin.
His suddenly appeared behind her, and with a distasteful look, pushed his own chakra surrounded palm into the back of his daughter. Hinata's byakugan disabled, and Hiashi stood there looking at his fallen daughter with cold, emotionless white eyes.
"Hyuga has no need for such a weak heir such as you."
…has no need for such a weak heir as you…
Wind blew in fierce gusts threw Konoha streets, sending the late fall leaves rustling to break free of the tree prison that some were still held by. Those that had managed to escape tumbled down the streets and gathered in large piles, settling down as the wind died down.
The calm was interrupted.
A whirlwind of leaves gathered and began to swirl rapidly until suddenly; a very pissed off Naruto appeared, standing with his signature orange jumpsuit in the middle of the street. He looked both ways, and seeing nothing, his eye began to twitch.
An hour pass, and Naruto remained in the street, tappinh his foot impatiently. His snorted and looked to the sky, only to sigh and cross his arms in annoyance.
His legs finally took him out of the heating late summer sun and under a tree. The blonde He leaned up against the trunk and dark bark, sliding down until he sat with on knee propped up and the other down.
A few more hours passed, and the anger inside Naruto continued to grow rapidly. Eye, twitching, his fingers curled inwards slowly until he had made a very tight fist. An anger mark appeared on his head as the fist began to shake
"Damn it Ero-sennin! I'd like to see you train seriously and meet me on time instead of peep at women!!!"
Eyes still twitching, he stormed off into the bustling city.
Naruto remained un-amused, watching as people passed by and lazily walking down the street.
"Man… I'm starting to turn into Shikamaru…" he muttered, staring lazily up at thee blue sky before bumping to someone.
"Gomen…" he muttered apologetically, then slipped silently into another street, and his interest curiosity perked.
A crowd was gathered ahead.
Curiosity got the best of the 16 year-old and he maneuvered his way to the front of the group, but soon wished he hadn't.
Like I said. Short. But still, I want to try and keep people on the edge. Soo… reviews would greatly be appreciated. I'm also going to include a few OCs, so this space is going to be for new face profiles to put here, made up or original, just for those new fanfiction readers and stuff. If there are no new characters, this'll just be some reviewer replies or random comments
Name: Uzumaki Naruto
Age / Birthday: 15, October 10
Eye color: Blue
Hair color: Blonde
Rank: Chunin
Name: Hyuga Hinata
Age / Birthday: 15, December 27
Eye color: White (Some also describe the color as pale lavender)
Hair Color: Indigo
Rank: Chunin