Sorry about it taking so long to put out my first chapter of the story! I did not follow my original plans what so ever and, when I made the changes well EVERYTHING seemed out of place. Mainly Celestia actually, she basically declared war on the Forerunner before even seeing what lied inside the drop-pod (I wonder what that could have been... oh yea the forerunner.) So I messed that up and now I am just trying to take it step-by-step and follow closer to my original plot-line. So yea... Please tell me if you would wish to beta-read future chapters! *End of transmission*
It was around the time of the meteor shower during the show, Celestia and Luna both we're looking over Equestria and the Equine that resided in it's open plains and mounding hills, forests, and mountains alike. Meteor after meteor, Luna guided them threw-out the Ozone, have Celestia pick up the strays. The shower was almost over when one asteroid made it threw Luna's sheild-like-bubble diverting the others.
"Celestia, can you control that one for me?" Luna asked, feeling her sister's boredom.
"Of course Lulu!" Celestia remarked. "Umm Luna? That's not an asteroid..."
Confused, Luna decided to take a closer look with her telescope. "Of course it is an asteroid, what are you talking abou-" Luna said, cutting herself off mid-sentence, realizing that her sister was right. "Well its not going to hit anything, it will land about 1/4 of a kilometer away from the walls of Canterlot... Perhaps you should handle the shower until it stops, I'll go and make sure it doesn't hit anything, OK Celestia?"
"As you wish, sister." Celestia responded keeping her 'royal tone' up as a guard entered the room. "I trust this is of importance Shining Armour?"
"Uh yes it is, Princess. It looks like a asteroid has veered off course, and will land near Canterlot. I just came to inform you of this." Shining Armour said, barely gulping down his words.
"Yes we have seen this, Luna is going out there to make sure that nothing unexpected happens." Celestia said smoothly.
At the mention of "The Horrid Beast" otherwise known as Luna, rumors have been spread around the Barracks. The most popular ones is that she still is 'Nightmare Moon' in hiding, or that she still is plotting to overthrow her sister. These rumors have spread around like wildfire and when they hit Luna's own guards. Well lets say all hell broke loose that day, they refused to protect or even serve Luna for that matter, despite both their claims of Nightmare have being evicted from Luna's essence. Eventually the rumors of Luna's guards had spread beyond the barracks of Canterlot, they spread threw Equestria like peanut-butter is spread on toast (hungry yet?)
*MEANWHILE IN THE LEAGUE OF JUS- Err... Meanwhile about 1/4 of a kilometer away from Canterlot, Luna laid in a grass feild, waiting for the pony-sized asteroid to finally hit the ground*
"When will this thing fall? Its been 20 minutes alrea-" Luna (again) cut off mid-sentence, but this time it was by a flaming ball flying of her head and skimming the ground. Eventually grinding to a halt after multiple bounces and boulders. Still struck with shot that she felt the heat emulating from the object. "Hello?" She squeaked as she saw something stir in the crater it left behind.
"Help me... please..." A voice said, weakening in strength.
"I'll get help right away! Just stay her!" 'As if it has a choice' Luna thought. Luna quickly charged a levitation spell and cast it on the rubble of the crash, searching for the source of the voice. Quickly after finding the creature she levitated it and high-tailed it back to Canterlot.
*After a 'quick jog' back to the castle*
"SISTER!' Luna boomed in her traditional Canterlot voice.
"Yes Luna? What could you need at this hour, *slight gasp from Celestia* What is That you are carrying!?" Celestia questioned.
"I dont know, but I do know that whatever it is, its alive!" Luna said anticipating the worst response from Celestia.
"Then why did you bring it here? Take it to the hospital, quickly!" Celestia ordered.
"O-ok sister." Luna said, already turning around and running towards the Hospital.
*Transmission received* Good? Bad? Personally I think that this intro is much better than the last. I hope that the one person who followed this story and read the other one agrees! Special thanks to The Dark for helping me decide which story to write! *End of transmission*
