Okay Sorry but I have to start all over the thing is I didn't knew having a script is not allowed in FanFiction so I'll try my best to make it into dialogs. So I'm sorry for the people who were reading this and the people who been writing bad review but to tell you the truth people ask if I'm a native speaker "Yes I am, well I been failing English class but I love to write like everyone else it's just I'm not good at it yet so please hearing those reviews really hurt but I guess everyone was just trying to tell me to stop this idiotic idea of a script story. SO hope everyone is happy so it's gonna take time to re do it to a dialog story so please be patinas (P.S Those other reviews I for sure did not wrote them this is the only account I have on this web site)