This story is about a girl named Lorraine makes alot of mistakes. Her parents are very devoted Chatholics and have to much control over her. So Lorraine and her boyfriend runaway. In the end she finally sorts out her feelings wiht the big man himself God.
Chapter one: The Cleansing
Hey God it's me Lorraine, again. I'm lying down on the steps outside of some church, looking up at the stars. I fell so naked, helpless, stupid, and not to mention crappy. I'm I going to hell? Or do I still have a chance? I guess I don't. I should of listened t my mother, I shouldn't have decided that I had to be bad just to show her I wasn't her perfect little dolly she raised me to be. I really screwed up didn't I? Life really didn't turn out as plan, does it ever?
You know God, its starting to rain. The drops are cold, but I feel as if their washing away everything horrible that I've done. I feel so dirty! God I know you've been watching me, you always watch everybody, but I still want to tell you my story. At least, my side of it.
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