AN: Hey guys, this is my first fanfiction I'm gonna be writing, It's just a idea that randomly came to me one day and I wanted to see where I could go with it. The name isn't permanent, if possible review with any better names?
Some basic info for this story: Naruto has been beaten pretty much all his life by the villagers
Konan, Nagato and Yahiko are younger (16 at the time naruto is 12, I know this is a big because I'm going to guess Nagato was around 30 when he died since the age wasn't announced) Jiraiya found them a lot later when he was just passing by the area and took them in, I know this is unlikely but so Konan will be able to build a relationship with Naruto fast instead of thinking of him as a little kid for a long time, instead they can be friends easier
Naruto will be able to use the paper style ninjutsu she does although he won't use it often and when he does it will have a slight difference to hers
Please review on things like should Naruto have more than two affinities (I've decided wind and fire due to Kurama) if yes, which element (of the main three remaining, please no things like saying he should have ice or things like that)
Note: this will probably some bashing of characters.
Jutsu will be in bold.
Chapter 1: Graduation
In the village of Konoha it was a bright and sunny day where all were happy and safe, well all but one young blonde spiky haired boy who was currently running from villagers who are screaming things like 'Death to the demon!'. Usually this wouldn't bother the hyperactive boy as he would just keep smiling in hopes they believe that he doesn't care and will stop doing this. The reason he is running today is that instead of glares and words they have decided to try and attack him.
As the boy ran he started thinking 'I could fight back but then there's less chance of being respected and being hokage, and I have to be hokage!'. So he carried on running away intent on getting to his house , 'I can't get hurt today, not when graduation exams are tomorrow!' He thought.
As he ran, people began throwing things at him causing him to have to dodge, which gave the civilians time to catch up, he decided to try his luck and turned into a ally and climbed the fence there then carried on running. As the civilians were about to climb the fence aswell a wall appeared in front them, a wall which appeared to be made of... paper?
Naruto ran all the way back to his home and soon as he got in he locked the door before falling to the ground leaning against the door. After sitting there for a while he noticed a package with a envelope on top sitting on his table. This had him excited but decided on a bath first before opening so he went into the bathroom and had his bath.
As he came out of the bathroom he remembered the package on the table and decided to open it, as he about too he remembered the first time he got something like this
FLASHBACK:
A 6 year old Naruto was sitting on his bed crying while attempting to bandage himself up, the villagers had attacked him again, and he thought 'why? Why is it always me who gets attacked? I don't do anything too bad do I?'
After finishing bandaging himself he came out of his bedroom to find a package with a envelope sitting on his table. While afraid it was a trap, he couldn't resist his curiosity the thrill of knowing what was in the envelope and package.
He opened the envelope to find a note and some money! Naruto almost never had money, only the bits his 'jiji' sent him. He then went on to read the note, which read:
Naruto,
You do not know who I am and will not know for a long while as I am not allowed to reveal myself to you for now. Just know from this letter and package there are people who care for you and that I will be watching you from a distance for your safety. If you wish to meet me, pass the genin exam when you go to the academy. Good luck and enjoy the gifts.
From, a friend
Naruto was really happy to have someone to rely on even if he couldn't meet him/her. He then decided to open the package and inside were two more packages, one reading 'open now' and the other 'open on completion of the other package'. He opened the package which said he could now to find a load of scrolls, all having thinks like 'chakra control' and 'what chakra is' on them. Naruto thought 'oh great I have to read... This sucks' then he saw a note saying 'if you master all this, you'll get some 'super cool jutsu' you want'. He immediately began reading.
FLASHBACK END
Since then, Naruto has been getting these packages as he finishes the others work left in them. He now started to read the note, it said:
Naruto,
It's almost time for graduation, I know you can do this, all you have to worry about is whether they allow you to do a different type of clone as your too powerful for the normal. I hope you pass, then I can finally reveal myself to you, although I will only see you shortly, I shall be leaving on a mission when you receive your teams so I will come see you before I leave.
Inside the package are some clothes, do not wear that orange monstrosity any longer, show them what you can do.
From, a friend
Naruto thought 'it sucks that I can't talk to her long when I pass, but oh we'll after the mission!' He decided to open the package with his clothes in the morning so they do not get dirty and went to bed.
Naruto was just walking into the academy and as he did he had less of the usual glares he received, which surprised him greatly. He just counted himself luckily and sat down in his seat, only to hear someone screech at him so he muttered quietly "oh no, the banshee is here" said banshee heard this however and screamed "what did you call me!? I am not a banshee! Right Sasuke?" Sasuke just ignored which caused everyone to snicker. After this, the banshee came back to Naruto and said "why are you dressed like that idiot?" Naruto no longer wore the orange 'kill me now' jumpsuit, it was replaced with a standard black shirt with the Uzumaki swirl on the back, with a white hooded jacket with black stripes on it. He also worse standard shinobi black pant followed by black sandals.
He replied to the banshee saying " Sakura, I've finally decided to stop looking like an embarrassment to my clan, even if they are gone" he had gotten the basics of his clan from the mystery friend a while ago. The banshee, now identified as Sakura was about to speak but was interrupted by Sasuke "Ha! Your clans all dead? They must've been pretty pathetic shinobi, if they even exist, which I doubt, no orphan like you could have a clan."
After this was said, there was silence until crys of "your so cool Sasuke" was heard while Naruto just lowered his head, having his hair cover his eyes to which Sakura said "aw, is Naruto gonna cry?" Everyone started to look at the boy looking for any recognition of him answering until suddenly he threw 2 kunai, making them sail by Sasuke and Sakura's heads respectively which caused everyone, even Sasuke with usual 'Uchiha indifference' to look wide eyed at Naruto, before any confrontation could begin Iruka walked in yelling "take your seats! Time for the exam".
The first exam was a written exam, which Naruto discovered had a genjutsu on it by glancing at another persons sheet. He quickly raised his hand and Iruka came and dispelled with promises of checking it out who did it. After this the test was fairly average, Naruto wasn't a genius but he was by no means stupid since he had to read for his mystery friend to give him jutsu.
The next exam was the throwing exam in which you threw 10 kunai followed by 10 shuriken at multiple targets. Sakura got 5/10 for kunai and 7/10 for her shuriken. Sasuke got 9/10 kunai and 10/10 shuriken. Naruto managed to get 9/10 on both which surprised everyone greatly.
The next test was the taijutsu test where you either spar with a teacher or fellow student for 3 minutes or until you cannot continue. Sakura sparred with Iruka and managed to last 1:50 into the 3 minutes and was deemed a pass, barely. Naruto was about to face Mizuki when Sasuke ran over to him and whispered something in his ear. Mizuki nodded and said "Naruto, Sasuke is your new opponent" this caused all people who weren't being tested to come watch the 'smack down of the dead last' as soon as the fight began, Sasuke ran straight in with a right hook which Naruto ducked under and attempted a leg sweep which was jumper over. Naruto smirked. He knew this had just begun.
Naruto saw Sasuke's frustrated expressions before he charged with a right hook again which this time was slapped away with the back of Naruto's left hand. Sasuke then used the momentum from moving forward with the right hook to try the same with a left. This time the punch was caught between both of Naruto's hands inches before they connected with his nose. Naruto the pushed Sasuke back from his hand, and as he stumbled, Naruto attempted to kick Sasuke in the chest but the foot was caught and twisted. As Naruto was falling from having his foot twisted, he placed his hands on the ground and sprang back using them to have a small distance between them. Once he was on his feet, Sasuke said "how are you doing this? I'm a Uchiha and your a pathetic nobody who lied about having a clan." Hearing this, Naruto angered and with a burst of speed he managed to connect the first clean hit in this spar and knocked Sasuke out of the arena. After this, he went up to him and said "Ask Iruka-sensei about the Uzumaki clan."
Everybody was shocked. Sasuke had never lost before but the instructor called it, Naruto, the dead last, had defeated Sasuke. They all went in for the next test, which turned out to be the jutsu test.
Naruto raised his hand. "Yes Naruto?" Iruka asked. Naruto said "Iruka-sensei can I use a clone variant? The normal clone takes too little chakra for me to use, that's why it looks sick, chakra overload." Iruka nodded and said "It's impressive you need to use a variant, you know one right? Do you need anything like water for a water clone or is it a different one?" Naruto replied "it's the shadow clone jutsu." To say Iruka was shocked was a understatement but he calmed himself and said "That's impressive, how many can you make? I myself can only handle 2-4" Naruto replied with a grin "My record is 50 but I've never tried higher!" Iruka just gaped at him until Sakura screamed "I bet Sasuke could make 100 easily!" To which Iruka said "Sasuke would be exhausted with 1, and that's impressive, Naruto just has huge reserves due to his clan."
Everyone was shocked again, he does have a clan after all and then they were filled in on the clan before the test came. Sakura and Sasuke both passed, followed by Naruto along with many others. The day had exhausting for everyone so Naruto went home and straight to sleep for the next day.
The next day, in the academy Naruto was covering his ears from the banshees cries for a date with Sasuke. Despite this he was really happy, his friend was gonna meet him today! Soon enough Iruka came in and announced the teams. "Team 1... (-Teams 1-6-) Team 7 will be Sasuke Uchiha, Sakura Haruno and Naruto Uzumaki with Kakashi Hatake as a sensei. (-Team 8 and 10 same as canon)" as soon as be finished this a huge wind blew in through the open window and brought in a lot of... Paper? The paper them started to take shape, while doing so it said "you forgot me Iruka, I'm also in team 7." Iruka the said "ah yes, my apologies, Konan will also be on team 7 due to numbers."
Naruto immediately jumped out his chair and walked over to her and said "it's been you this whole time?" She was shocked, she was expecting to explain who she was but she nodded, which led to Naruto quickly embracing her. Konan was surprised until she got out of it by Sakura yelling "Let go of her pervert!" And ran over and punched Naruto. Konan then glared at Sakura and said "He's not a pervert, he was thankful to me and this is our first official meeting." Sakura scoffed "Thankful for what? No one likes him, he's dangerous, my mum is on the council and told me so!" Konan just sighed and said "Your a idiot. Make your own decisions on him and he was thankful for me helping him after being beaten by the village-" she was cut off by Naruto putting his hand over her mouth and saying "Don't, they don't need to know what the villagers do to me." Konan sighed but nodded.
Sakura then chose to screech "What did they do to you? Whatever it was you deserved it." By this point Konan was enraged so she slapped Sakura and said "That's it, I'm telling you all now, Naruto don't stop me, no one deserves this! You want to know what happened to him? He gets beaten within a inch of his life all the time for fun. Even if he's just walking around. He's banned from most shops too. You would die if you lived a day of his life. Iruka, tell our sensei we'll be at the hokage monument." Konan the grabbed Naruto's hand and stormed out the room leaving shocked and horrified classmates with a guilty looking Iruka.
-END-
I think that's a okay first chapter, I hope you like it too, please review on anything I need to work on, also do you think I should continue this person or do first? If first, who? Hopefully I get a lot of feedback, thanks!
