Blast to the past!
This is my first fanfiction so any help on what to improve on my story is greatly helpful
The pairing for this fic is not yet decided i will hold a poll though(choices at the bottom)
Will take place during the sasuke vs naruto fight(the dome sphere thing)
Disclaimer: I do not nor will I ever own naruto the oc's are mine though.
ALL KYUUBI in BOLD
narutos thoughts in italics
speech is normal
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Chapter 1.
Two figures stood at opposite ends of the valley.
Sasuke stood at one end in his transformed state of curse mark level 2.
Murky grey hair and the three tomoe sharingan is his eyes. A star shaped tatoo across his nose and two hand like wings protruding from his back.
At the other end of the valley was Naruto in his somewhat trasformed state of his 1 tailed form.
His hair was even messier than before and is blood red slitted eyes glaring at the person across from him his so called best friend. there was also this eerie red clock in the form of a fox with 1 tail at the end.
SASUKE!!! Naruto shouted. 'Damnit he won't listen to me at all'
"ILL gain power at any cost naruto even if it means killing you" Sasuke shouted back.'Damn Dobe wont leave me alone! Cant he see all i want is power nothing more' Sasuke thought.
They stood across from each other with sasuke at the shodai hokage statue and naruto at madara's.
sasuke immediatly went through some handseals and grabed hold of his left hand and charged up the chidori.
Something looked wrong though as the lightning turned a dark grey colour.
As soon as naruto saw this he gathered up the remainder of his chakra and formed a rasengan though this rasengan was a mix of the kyuubis chakra and narutos own.
They leaped of of the statues.
RASENGAN!!!!
CHIDORI!!!!
naruto and sasuke both thrust their attacks at each other and they clashed.
lightning,wind and blue and red chakra flew every where and slowley a black sphere started to close around them.
BOOOOOOM!!!!!!!
The sphere exploded but for some strange reason only sasuke came out of the dome of chakra and no naruto.
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Well what do you think?
What happened to naruto?(heres a hint read the title)
This is my first time so please go easy on the flames and review if you can.
Pairings i will do
Naruto/young tsunade
Naruto/fem haku
Naruto/Kurenai
Naruto/anko
Naruto/fem kyuubi
Naruto/oc
Naruto/yugito
Naruto/tenten
Naruto/temari
Pairings i will NOT do
Naruto/Hinata(its so overated and there are far to many)
Naruto/Ino(she's a whore plain and simple)
Naruto/Sakura(same as above)
Naruto/Yaoi(I HATE YAOI EVERY 4 STORIES THERE IS AT LEAST ONE YAOI IN THERE!!!!:( )
So vote!!:)
Remember Highly au kurenai anko and fem kyuubi will be with naruto.
you'll see what i mean next chapter.
Ja ne