(This is my first fanfic! Hope you enjoy it! and no harsh comments please…)
Chapter 1
Hurricane Tune was walking in the streets of Canterlot with his best friends Steel Sword and Sapphire Blizz. Hurricane Tune was a cream-colored Pegasus stallion with light blue mane and tail, his cutie mark was a music tone with a pair of wings. Steel Sword was a light brown earth pony stallion with blond mane and tail, his cutie mark is a shield and a sword. And Sapphire Blizz was a white unicorn with a purple slightly curly mane and tail, his cutie mark is a sapphire heart. They trotted towards a restaurant. "Oh how dazzling the restaurant is…" Sapphire said in his Mid-Atlantic English accent. "It sure is..." Steel said looking at the sign of the restaurant. The three of them trotted inside. Sapphire and Steel were in their seat already while Hurricane wasn't yet. Hurricane wasn't looking where he was going he suddenly bumped into something…or someone. He fell backwards. "Ow…oh i-im sorry" he said still closing his eyes trying to stand up. "o-oh u-m…" the pony said in a timid quiet voice. "Hey Fluttershy! Are you okay?!" I heard somepony said in a worried tone. He opened his eyes, his sight was kind of blurry he closed it again and opened. He saw 6 female ponies. There were two Unicorns, two Pegasus, and two Earth Ponies. He stood up and said "I'm very sorry…" then he started to walk towards his friends. "Hey dude, you okay?" Steel said. "I-im fine…just need my glasses though" Hurricane said as he sat down.
"My, my, looks like you've bumped into a mare, Tune" He said looking at the 6 female ponies walking towards them. "Can we help you?" Steel said looking at the purple mare. "Uh…your friend here bumped into our friend…." a rainbow mare spoke infront of the purple mare. "U-um girls, i-I don't mind…i-it's okay he said-" the timid and shy cream-colored mare was interrupted by an orange mare "and he didn't even looked her in the eye when he said sorry…". Steel and Sapphire looked at Hurricane with their You- didn't-look-her-in-the-eye?! Look. Hurricane looked at the cream-colored mare in the eye and said "Im very sorry, miss, for bumping into you awhile ago…" he bowed down "im very sorry…". I heard whispers from the other mares. I was starting to get annoyed. "U-um i-it's okay….y-you d-didn't mean it…" Her voice was like an angel's voice. Wait… he thought to himself. Angel's Voice? Timid and Shy? ohmyCelestia it's her! He thought to himself again. He faced her, shocked. She was in wide shocked too….well both of us were shocked. "H-hurricane? Is that you?" the cream-colored mare said. I was speechless.
(Tune in to ze next chapter! And then again I hoped you enjoyed the first chapter! oh and my Oc's
Hurricane Tune: art/Mlp-Oc-Hurricane-Tune-357407426
Sapphire Blizz: art/MLP-Oc-Sapphire-Blizz-357412421
Steel Sword: art/MLP-Oc-Steel-Sword-357406981)
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